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         You and Germany had spent all day out in town, doing random things together. It would have been a lovely day had it not been for the sudden downpour that started. Well, that, and the fact that Germany's overall attitude was extremely awkward and suspicious. The two of you were now in his car, completely drenched. “Well, that was fun. I needed another shower today anyway.” You smiled wide at Germany.”

“Yeah. Sorry about that. The weather didn't call for any rain today.” Germany fiddled around with his keys until finally getting them in the ignition. Now the car wouldn't start. He sighed. “It's just one thing after another. Stay in here, a don't want you any more wet.” Germany got out of the car, opened up the hood and started looking around. A few minutes later he got back in, looking like a wet puppy. “I think I fixed it.” He did, the car started without a problem.

“Yay. Go German engineering.” You side hugged him as you two started down the road.

“I really am sorry today got so messed up. It wasn't supposed to turn out like this.” He blushed and stared straight ahead.

You shook your head. “It wasn't messed up at all. I always have fun when I'm with you. No matter what we do. Besides, I like the rain.”

“If you say so.” He sighed. “Things still didn't go as planned though.” Now at his home, he jumped out of the car and opened the door for you. You both made a mad dash for the front porch. It began to thunder and lightning. “The rain's really coming down now isn't it? Looks like we came home just in time.” Germany let you in the house. Italy was there waiting, smiling from ear to ear.

“Heya Germany. Did you ask her yet? What did she say?” Italy was bouncing around the house excitedly. “Come on Germany tell me already.”

Germany's face was bright red. You couldn't tell if it was from anger or embarrassment though. “No Italy. I didn't ask her. Now be quiet before I stuff you in the dryer again.”

“What? But why not-a? That was the whole reason you went out with her today!” Italy seemed devastated that whatever was supposed to happen today didn't. “Germany, you're going to lose her if you don't ask soon-a.”

“Ask me what?” By now you were curious, you really wanted to know what was upsetting Italy so much.

Germany still said nothing. He just stood there, shuffling his feet. “Fine, I'll-a tell her then.” Italy walked over to Germany and began looking through the inside of his soaked jacket. “Here it is.” He placed something in Germany's hand and tried to shove him towards you. “Y-you're too heavy. Just ask her.”

“B-but.” Germany cleared his throat and walked to stand in front of you. “I'm sorry this isn't exactly romantic. I planned it out to be.” His face was deep red. Slowly he dropped to one knee, still not looking at you he held the small black box up for you to see.

You tackled Germany to the ground, kissing all over his face. “Yes, yes, yes.” You continued to kiss and hug him as he sat up.

“Really? I didn't even ask yet.” He laughed. “I guess I was worried for nothing then.” He hugged you back tight. “Sorry if I was acting weird. I was afraid you would say no.”

“You were acting a little weird. But I can understand that.” You laughed. “I just hope there's a ring in that box. Because now if there's not I'm going to be pretty disappointed.”

“Of course.” Germany opened the ring box and placed the wedding ring on your finger. It fit you perfectly.

“Yay. You finally did it-a.” Italy hugged you both. “It's about time-a too. Germany's been trying to ask you forever you know. He planned out asking you at least a dozen times before-a.” Italy laughed until he saw the stern look on Germany's face. “I'll-a go now. Forget I said anything.” Italy ran away as fast as he could.

You hugged Germany tight. “Well, I guess if I ever  need to know any of your secrets I know who to talk to, don't I?”

Germany kissed you. “Nein, I won't keep secrets from you. I promise.” He smiled sweetly, brushing the wet strands of hair from your face. “Now, let's go change, we're still soaked. ”
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:icongoldenhawktress:
Goldenhawktress Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
XD poor Italy...Hetalia Spinning Italy Pasta Icon Ve~ 
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:iconwhybot221:
Whybot221 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015
he stuffed him in the dryer...really:)...such a cute story:)
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:iconzoethegreat8668:
zoethegreat8668 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014   General Artist
dis is adorable
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:iconlinsasake:
LinsaSake Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
*takes note* Never tell Italy secrets! EVER!!!

:iconimdeadplz:
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icespark1298 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
I just love the pictures of the contries holding their hands in a heart shape <3
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:icongamingirlkayla2:
Gamingirlkayla2 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
now be quiet before i stuff you in the dryer again... AGAIN!!! GERMANY!!! WHAT HAVE YOU BEEN DOING TO ITALY XD love your stories there so fluffy and cuute!!
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:iconcarterrico99:
carterrico99 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014
*italy comes out of no where* PASTAAAAAAA !
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:icondark-candy-cane:
Dark-Candy-Cane Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
IKR? My reaction was like that! Poor Italy...IF HE DIED, NO-ONE WOULD BE ABLE TO MAKE PASTA! *Faints over sudden realisation*
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:iconzoethegreat8668:
zoethegreat8668 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014   General Artist
NO NOT THE PASTAAAA
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:icondark-candy-cane:
Dark-Candy-Cane Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
NOT THE SOLUTION FOR GLOBAL WAR- I'll hush up now. -_-
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:iconhelenadoodle:
helenadoodle Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*faints* 
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:iconhetaloid-misaki:
Hetaloid-Misaki Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg my dreams o(^▽^)o♥ this was perfect!
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:iconsakura-yotobari:
Sakura-Yotobari Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Omg, every story that I read of yours just keeps on getting better than the last one, you are going to kill me with happiness one of these days because I seriously love you so much!
              :heartyfaint: 
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AlexWhtie Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My reactions.....

Part 1 - Fangirl attack
Part 2 - Serious case of the blushies.
Part 3 - :iconimdeadplz:
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:iconflyingmintbunny2013:
flyingmintbunny2013 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Me- :iconimdeadplz:
Germany- :icongermanyfacepalmplz: get up...
Me- :iconitalysaluteplz: yes sir!
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:icondinorex33:
dinorex33 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You my friend... Have made MANY Germany fangirls VERY happy.
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:iconshadowy-clockwork:
shadowy-clockwork Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
AGAIN?!? ;^; POOR ITALY
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:iconhaleyboplucy:
haleyboplucy Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Stuff you in the dryer... AGAIN???!!! Poor ita-chan
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:iconheyimkait:
heyimkait Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
He's lucky. It could have been the washing machine or the boiler...
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:iconsmoshturtle:
smoshturtle Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
yay!!!!!!!
i feel happy germany asked to marry me!!!da~
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:icon109144:
109144 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG I ACCIDENTALLY READ THE END FIRST...WELL, HAPPILY EVER AFTER AND ALL, AND I GOTTA READ THE OTHER PARTS...
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:iconxxartimisxx:
xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Student General Artist
That is sooo cute!!!!!
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:iconthamutt:
ThaMutt Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
shy germany is best germany
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:iconhetalialover72:
hetalialover72 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
Yay!!!!!!! :)
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:iconjulchenbeildshimdt:
JulchenBeildshimdt Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
Ich liebe this!!!!! <3
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:iconcocoberry123:
Cocoberry123 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
Oh Italy. There's so much not right about you.
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:icongabriellesee:
GabrielleSee Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
.... I actually misread at one part and thought that Germany was supposed to tell the reader that she was overweight.... except Italy spilled the beans instead...
:icongermanyfacepalmplz: There are days when I despise myself for such acute stupidity
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:iconfurchild1204:
furchild1204 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fail xD don't worry,I misread stuff like that all the time.
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:iconayano-otori:
Ayano-Otori Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha. now that you say that i read it that way…..funnies
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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
Loved it XD
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:icongoreypsychochick:
GoreyPsychoChick Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
LJFHGBFF I'M HAVING A FUCKING SPAZZ FEST RIGHT NOW OMG :iconhandspazzplz: That was SOOOOOO fluffy!
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:iconpurplechaos222:
purplechaos222 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
:iconromanoplz: :iconspeechbubbleplz: What did I say about putting my idiota brother in the dryer you potato bastard?!?!?!?!?

Me: :iconspeechbubbleplz: Lovino its okay!!! Germany wont do it again. I promise!!

:icongermanyplz: :iconspeechbubbleplz: Ja I will.

:iconitalyplz: :iconspeechbubbleplz: B-but fratello, it's-a fun!!!


Me: :iconspeechbubbleplz: :iconfacepalmplz:
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:iconthatrandomgirl7819:
ThatRandomGirl7819 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
Made. My. Year. No joke.....
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:iconthecompletesaga:
TheCompleteSaga Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconlolyesplz:
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:iconhetaliafangirl00:
HetaliaFangirl00 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Student General Artist
:icondatassplz: That comment~! :iconlaughingplz: :iconlaughing2plz:
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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
You made my day with your comment XD
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germanpuppydog Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Haha :iconwtfisthisplz: :iconfacepalmplz:
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TomatoBoxFairyFeli Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol!!!!!! dear god.....
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:iconmoonsinola:
Moonsinola Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
That is so full of win. SO MUCH WIN!
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:icondramaprincess2898:
dramaprincess2898 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
lolololololol
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:iconreikamiu2:
reikamiu2 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
kyaaaaaaaa >//////////< *squeeee contained though*
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silver-and-jayla Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
"Now be quiet before I stuff you in the dryer again." Nein Germany, you shall NEVER stuff an Italian in the dryer! NOO
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:iconkatniss-hp-twilight:
Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
why can't :ixonsexygermanyplz: be real? D: I love him so much, ja? love the story!
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:icongabriellesee:
GabrielleSee Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
:icongermanyfacepalmplz::iconsaysplz:*materializes into real world* Why ze hell are you questioning yourself?
:icongabriellesee::iconsaysplz:see? This is exactly why he can't be real. Hot tsunderes (who might sometimes seem like jerks) should not exist. All the otaku fangirls will die of extreme nosebleeds!
:icongermanyrantplz::iconsaysplz:....I'm not a jerk. It's just coincidental zat I'm a lot smarter zan you are... Besides, I didn't say you could stop training. Drop down undt give me twenty.
:icongabriellesee::iconsaysplz:This is exactly what I mean. =___= well, it's time to clean up this mess.
:icongermanyplz::iconsaysplz:You can't get rid of me zat easily. I'm a country and you're just a little girl.
:iconscaryrussiaplz::iconsaysplz:.....actually...... I can ^___^ *le spastic fridge throw* :iconshizuoplz:
:icongermanypalmplz::iconsaysplz:.....You are aware of ze fact that I'm still here....ja?
:icongermanyspazzplz::iconsaysplz:You may have won this time..... but I'll be back.... =____= Wait..... Where the heck did that table even come from?.....and when did I turn into you? (~ØπØ)~ *le dramatic music plays*
~to be continued~
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Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
lol, and I was just swaering at smyself in German not too long ago for forgetting I had a Chem test today... merp.

((that was awesome, by the way.))
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nightbloom589 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
do all of them purrrpose aru?
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