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        You were out on the water, in the same boat, in the same weather conditions as you always were when you encountered the Loch Ness monster. Clouds loomed overhead threatening to soak you at any moment. It would be worth it though. No matter how many times you saw her, the excitement never went away. "Are you ready for this?" Scotland opened up the barrel letting the now familiar smell of the pungent cheese escape. It didn't make your eyes water like it used to, but it still burned your sinuses without fail. "She should be on her way now that the smell was out." He gave you a bright smile. "You getting excited?"

You nodded, how could you nod be? Today was the day you tried to ride on Nessie's back. "Very, I just hope I can do it." The water rippled next to the boat.

"Well, we're about to find out aren't we lass?" He waved the cheese over the side of the boat and called for her. Nessie quickly brought her beautiful dragon like body above the water's surface. It was amazing how a creature as large as she could simply float on the surface. "I've gotten her here, now it's your turn."

You gulped back your fears, took another treat of cheese into your hand and calmly fed her. She ate from your palm like usual, no problems yet. "Now?"

"Just do like I told you earlier, everything should be fine." Though Scotland's words were calm and confident enough, you could tell he was just as nervous as you.

You gently began stroking Nessie down her spine, as you did, the large black scales that ran down it would flatten to make way for your hand. Even more slowly, you climbed onto the edge of the boat, still no problems. You took a very deep breath and jumped onto the back of the Loch Ness monster. "I did it." Nessie Straightened out her neck and turned her head to look at you. Complete panic set in. After what seemed like forever, she relaxed. "I guess she's not going to eat me then. How do I make her move?"

Scotland was grinning ear to ear. "Just tell her. She usually listens pretty well."

"Okay then. Nessie, could we please go for a little ride? If you don't mind that is." You were still pretty afraid of her, and didn't want to tick her off. You were already moving, she wasn't upset at all, in fact, she seemed happy. Riding on her back was like gliding on the smoothest ice, you couldn't even feel yourself moving, you had to look at the scenery just to make sure. Without warning Nessie dove under the water, taking you with her. She swam much faster now, making it impossible for you to really see anything in too much detail. You had to cling tightly to her neck as to not fall off. Nessie slowed down for only a second to show you a large patch of seaweed swarming with colorful fish. When you resurfaced you were back at the boat and you were obviously drenched. Nessie lowered herself to make it easier for you to get back in the boat.

Scotland helped you down, giving you a quick kiss on your soaked cheek. "Enjoy your ride?"

"Of course, it was amazing. But why did she take me under water like that?" You continued stroking Nessie's back. You swore you heard a cat like purr coming from her as you did.

"Easy love, she was showing you her home." Scotland smiled brightly. "Now you know exactly where Nessie lives so you can find her even without me. I have to admit, I'm a little jealous, it took years before she'd show me underwater."

You gave him a teasing grin. "I guess we know who the real master of mythical creatures here is then don't we?"

Nessis snorted in agreement.

"See, even Nessie agrees." You laughed.

"Nessie, all that cheese, all those long back rubs. What about the time you had a fish bone stuck in your teeth? It all means nothing?" Scotland was pleading, but Nessie wasn't buying it. Scotland sighed. "Two timed by the Loch Ness monster, I won't forget this."
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missred-missused Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I just might very well love you XD this is awesome!
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Horrorismylife Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
Oi; Girls gotta stick together. Very adorable c:
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Goldenhawktress Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
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nyannyan1111 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Student Filmographer
YES I GET TO RIDE THE LOCH NESS MONTSER AND GO UNDER WATERI am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! La la la la La la la la :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: MEMEME MEMEME MEMEME Rainbow Sheep Rainbow Sheep Chica's Exercise Dance (Chat Icon) Chica's Exercise Dance (Chat Icon) Chica's Exercise Dance (Chat Icon) Super happy egg 
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Gothfoxgirl Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015
LOLED SO HARD AT THIS
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FFabeonG Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is getting my favourite- I freakin' LOVE it :D
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Kotetsufan Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Nessie is such a troll
:icontrollfaceplz: <U mad bro?]
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Notallama11 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Nessie.........my friend's name......e_____o
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firedancer123 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist

Aw.... Poor Scottie... *Kisses Alllistor* Don't worry.... I'm a bit too much of a pyro to be with Nessie all the time...



Great Job!!!!

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PennypPen Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice. I loved it.
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Jdvann12 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
Best ending ever!! XD
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shadowandme0215 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Two timed by the lock ess monster xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDFFFFDDDdSDDDDDDjfhrbrkcufnbffkcbgnfii
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1pc9 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist
So cool
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hammy20113 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
He got trolled by Nessie XD
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DarkDiamond81 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you deserve it,scotland!
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inocentHorror Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I love that ending! XD
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AtlantisReturns Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
AAWWWWW I totally just died a little.
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B-Rabit Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
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Ambymation Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so cute!
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wolfplusanima Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
XD Scotland got trolled by Nessie.
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fioleeshadamy411 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student Artist
lmfao oh my god that is so funny that should show brittain speaking of
*britain was hiding behind the cheese barrle with nose plugs and goggles and freaked out in his mind when he saw the monster take the girl underwater*
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veonfan Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My mom told me, "_____ go to bed!" And I'm like "mom not now, I'm riding on Nessie's back!" I've never gotten a look from her before where her face almost said,"do u need mental help?" XD
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darkfang1012 Featured By Owner 6 hours ago  New Deviant
Same
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batcookies152 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Poor Scotland~But I am just THAT good with mythical creatures :meow:
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PoliceGirlVespa Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
Love how Nessie trolled him at the end :D
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Loved the ending ^.^
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owlhead20 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student General Artist
first off...THE WATER HORSE!!!!! and Scotland just got trolled by the loch ness monster!!!!!!! best date ever!!!!!!!
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TsumesWolf Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Man i feel bad for scottland he got DUPED By the lock ness monster! Boo yeah baby!
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hetalialover17 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you are awesome
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD thank you!
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lifealwaysgoeson Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"Two timed by the Loch Ness Monster, I won't forget this."
I died. I'm still trying really hard not to wake up my sister in the other room with my laughing.
(She had a long day at work and I want to let her rest)
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well I'm glad you liked it ^^ >w<
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lifealwaysgoeson Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome.
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firemaster298 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love the ending!
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^^
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saiwolfseye Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
omg amazing
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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saiwolfseye Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
your welcome^_^
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larriss Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
love this
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skye-pixie Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So cute!!! ^_^
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Lakaka99 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Yay! Nessie is my fave mythical creature!!!
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Smile047 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Woah, woah! Nessie's real! Just ask Scottie! :D
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Lakaka99 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
I know she's real! But she's still a mythical creature! A cute one, btw.
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Smile047 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I suppose you have a point. But seriously. Nessie is real. None of my family believes me. But she's real. And I completely agree. Nessie is SO KAWAII!!! :D
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Lakaka99 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
Same here... She is KAWAII, ARU!!!!!
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D-GirlLegend Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
awww it was sooo cool and awesome :)
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phoenixfirekid Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
the underwater was really cool, i think seen something like it
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you enjoyed it :heart:
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phoenixfirekid Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
thanks
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