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        You sat at home relaxing while making a puzzle when your phone rang. You already knew who it would be. Everyday around lunch time Seborga would call you and invited you to come over. Normally you were busy with work or school so you had to turn him down, but today you were free and looked forward to accepting his invitation. You answered the phone. "Hey Seborga, whatcha need?"

His voice was cheery just like it always was. "Hey, "_____", you want to come over today, or are you busy again?"

"I can come over, I'll be there soon okay?"

"Okay awesome, bring everything you'll need to go swimming. See you soon." After the two of you hung up, you made your way to his home. He was already in a pair of swim trunks waiting on you when you arrived. "Hey, it took you long enough. You can change in my bathroom." He smiled and let you inside.

You quickly made you way to the bathroom and changed into your favorite bathing suit, it was one Poland had bought you on your last birthday. "Okay, I'm ready."

"Yes you are." Seborga wiggled his eyebrows at you and took your hand, leading you down to the beach behind his house. "I'm glad you finally decided to come today, I was beginning to think you were just avoiding me." He smiled at you, though you could tell he was somewhat serious. "Well, we'll really have to make this last huh?"

You nodded and looked out over the water, it was as smooth as glass and crystal clear, but not for long. "Race you there." You took off for the water as fast as your feet would carry you. Even with the head start you'd given yourself Seborga passed you and jumped into the water.

"Beat you again."He leaned back and floated on his back. "When you going to learn, you can't outrun me?" It was true, he was incredibly fast and no matter how many times you'd tried to race him, he'd always won.

You let out a little feigned sigh. "I guess you're right, I should just stop trying, I'll never be as fast as you are." You slowly snuck closer to him, and once close enough began vigorously splashing him with water.

He began coughing and spewing out water. "Hey, that's not cool." Seborga quickly retaliated by tackling you under the water and holding you down for several seconds. The two of you spent most of the afternoon taking turns half drowning each other. The setting sun came quickly and you realized you were pretty fatigued from all the horse play. "Tired?" Seborga smiled and handed you a pool lounger. "Here, we can watch the sunset on these." He helped you get on and gave you a sweet smelling, tropical drink, then relaxed next to you.

You sat back and sipped on the drink he'd given you. "Today was really nice, I wish I could come over more often."

He laughed. "Well It's not like I don't invite you. That's for sure." The sun hit the water, casting beautiful streaks of red, pink and purple through the sky. The water below glistened in a perfect reflection. It looked like a painting. The gentle sound of the waves hitting the shore was enough to put you to sleep. "Seborga took your hand and smiled. "I'd say this, is a perfect sunset."  
This happens after my "Seven minutes in heaven" story Here's the link.

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HETALIAluv4ever Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Student Writer
I imagined myself half drowning him and yelling, "Love hurts!!!"
Goldenhawktress Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
ZPupG1rl19 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Student General Artist
ohmygog, this is so sweet and pretty and adorable
I can even see the beach and the sunset!
ranmas2 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
Aww, that's so sweet~ ^^ He's adorable
xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student General Artist
HetaliaFangirl00 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Silly Reader-chan, you can't outrun an Italian~
Lizzels199 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
unless you are Italian (part) (okay, very small part bUT STILL) :iconiggybrowsplz:
HElCHOU Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconitsbeautifulplz: you are such an awesome writer!
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
why thank you! ><
HElCHOU Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome ^^
Sessinara Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
awww how very cute this is like really! (read poland not long ago X'D)
lordypantsitslola Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Aww! This is so adorable ♥ :3
leakittychan Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
aww so cute
Prussian-Ninja Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
So kawaii~ :3 :awestruck:
Ke-chan12 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
this is really adorable and i love it :)
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank You ^^
Ke-chan12 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
you're welcome
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