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        You approached the small ranch you'd received directions to via text message. You had no idea where you were or even who you were meeting. You felt okay about going only because Romano had assured you everything would be fine. Not knowing what to do, you looked through the barns for someone you knew.  Eventually you found Spain, he was busy tending to one of the horses. "Hey Spain, are you the one who sent me on the wild goose chase?"

"Oh hey, sorry I didn't think you'd get here that fast. You must be really good with directions. I hope you didn't have to search for me too long." He gave his usual cheerful smile.

"No, I only looked in one other barn. I've only been here five minutes or so. Anyway, why I'm I here?" A weary, almost worried look covered your face. "You didn't call me out here to help you with your farm did you?"

He laughed and shook his head. "No way, I'd never do that to you. I have a little surprise for you, a date. You don't mind do you?"

"Of course not, that's a much better surprise than farm work." Glad you wouldn't be spending your time working, you let out a relieved breath. "What's the date?"

Spain grinned from ear to ear, happy you were up for what he had planned. "Well, take a guess, you're in a stable, filled with horses all tacked and ready to go."

You still weren't quite sure what the surprise was, so you just guessed. "You're taking me for a carriage ride?"

"Close, but not quite. I'm taking you horseback riding. You can choose whatever horse you'd like. All these horses are well mannered and won't throw you off, so you don't have to worry about that." Spain chose a chestnut colored palomino to ride.

You looked through the horses, trying to get a feel for them. They were all rather laid back and relaxed, but one caught your eye. A pure white horse, not a dark spot on her. "I can ride this one, right?" You were already gently stroking her mane, even if Spain suggested against it you would have wanted her.

"I should have known you'd pick her. Everyone wants the pure ones, either black or white. But yeah, you can ride her, she's as sweet as her name." Her name was easy enough to guess but Spain told you anyway. "Well, let's get Sugar and Dodge outside, they're ready to go already, you know how to ride right?"

You were a little embarrassed to admit it, but you didn't have even the slightest idea how to handle a horse. "Not really, I haven't been on or even around a horse since I was a little girl. But I'm a fast learner."

"Well lets hope so, I wouldn't want you falling off." Spain helped you onto your horse and explained the details of how to properly ride. After you felt you'd grasped the concept the two of you set off. You were headed to a slightly wooded area filled with small streams and other obstacles for your horse. This worried you a little bit, but you trusted Spain wouldn't give you anything you couldn't handle. "You feeling okay? You look a little nervous up there."

"I am I bit nervous, but I'll be okay. I'll get used to it in a little bit." You were right, in no time at all you had completely relaxed and felt right at home on your horses back. There was a problem, however, Spain's horse seemed to want to gallop and didn't like the slow speed at all, he seemed freaked out. Dodge began shaking his head and rearing up his front legs. It didn't take long at all for Spain to wind up on the ground. You jumped off Sugar and rushed over to him. "Are you okay?"

Spain just nodded and blushed. "Yeah, I'll be okay. I guess I'm not really one to be giving you riding lessons am I?" He sat up and rubbed his head.

Cuddling him tight, you rubbed where he'd hit his head. "It's not your fault I was going so slow, he just wanted to run."

"Actually, it is my fault." Spain rubbed the back of his head, smiling sheepishly. "I got my horses confused. I was riding the wrong one. That's Leporiphobia, he's scared of rabbits. These woods are full of rabbits you know."

You couldn't help but laugh. You thought it odd such a large animal would be scared of a rabbit, but really it was no worse than your fear of spiders. "Now I feel sorry for the horse. He probably thought you were sending him on a suicide mission."

"You're probably right. Come on, let's go find him." He sighed, trying to hide the fact that he was actually amused by the whole situation. "I owe him some treats."
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TitansCreation Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Whaaa Spain why must you be so cute?
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Italianna Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Omg! Rabbits O.O ma only weekness

- sees kitten - now dats~a nother story ^.^
Lol cute story amo ^.^

- hugs - Im~a out of pasta ( OMG WHY! :( ) but~a here's a cookie x3
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xXJetBlackOwlXx Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
Whaaaaa-!? I love horses, I ride all the time!
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MeineKleineBlume Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Student General Artist

I love this! <?xml:namespace prefix = da />I am a dummy!  You managed to combine my favorite two things (Spain and horses) into one story! You're so awesome!! :iconbravoplz: I need to hug you! :iconbrohugplz: 

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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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MeineKleineBlume Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Yeah, it was awesome! Maybe even more awesome than Prussia himself... Meow :3  I ride horses and I love Spain, so great combo!! :)
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Agretfethr Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol suicide by bunnies XD
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SneakyAlexaBlue24 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh shizzles.
I have a huge fear of spiders.
Omg :iconspiderplz:
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Lil-Snail Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
I WUV HORSES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are a genuis a genius I say!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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TheLegendofthestone Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ADORABLE!!!!!
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
Loved it ^w^
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Realmen-Gerita1238 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awwww!!!! silly spain
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MapleKitty34 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Actuall, I fear snakes. Like my fear is so bad, it's not even funny.
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keepburninglikefire Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh horse incidents are so fun...not. Since other people are sharing their incidents, let's see I've had a horse slip and throw me into a puddle, I fell off bareback, I've been projected over a jump, bucked like I was on an unbroken horse several times, and had a horse throw me into a wall and kick me in the back. Haha. Great story by the way.(:
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vocaloidanimefan Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this so much oh my gosh so adorable! Spain careful on which horse is the right one X3
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Puppypancake Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student General Artist
I love horses SO much!!! I would ride a difficult horse if Spain had one
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RussiaObssessive Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I ride horses! I love them! I also love the fact that there's the horses with the short names like Sugar and Dodge and then all the sudden LEPORIPHOBIA BIOTCHES
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sasukeisAjerk Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Lol
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azumimariekalico Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
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RosaPretty Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I've fallen of a horse but was due to the the fact when someone was teaching me something I always have to look at them, so they know i'm listening to them. But the thing she was standing to the side because horses have a blind spot and can't see directly infront of them. Plus it was a different instructor to the one I was used having and she was teaching me something I wasn't ready for, that and the saddle was tight enough, so what happened is the saddle loosened and I slid off as the horse wanted to go one direction and I went the other way and I fell off.
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Windup-Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love how you just turned that around! XD I was like everyone else, expecting the Reader to be thrown off of something like that. X3 I love that bit of humor mixed in there as well! <:
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TheFifthDollanganger Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not a Spain fangirl, but I own a Spanish breed of horse so I thought I'd read this. It was very good!
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^ Thank you! also, thank you for the watch.
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TheFifthDollanganger Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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Lightfeathy555 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwww so sweet XD
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emolove590 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
i-i love horses
n-nice story
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TheTalkingTomato Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL great story! :D
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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TheTalkingTomato Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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CooperKid248 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
XD At first, I thought Reader-chanwould be bucked off the horse or something. I actually had a horse disaster once. I was very little and I was riding my first horse. The person who gave her to us smoked and drank a lot, so I didn't like the woman that much. There was one horse who didn't like mine. Her name was Gypsy. She didn't like Kai at all. One day, me and two older girls were going to go for a ride when, I realized Gypsy was next to my horse. I freaked out and tried to make Kai go, but she didn't respod. Gypsy tried to kick her, but she got me in the ankle and Kai started running towards the barbed wire fence, but stopped just before it. Later, Kai was stolen by somebody, but my parents never tell me even though they've told me many times before. Ever since Gypsy kicked me, I never rode a horse ever again.
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Dang.. O_O
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CooperKid248 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
I know... It was a sad moment. I got put in a wheelchair on the second day of 5th gradend I couldn't walk so well. I'm no longer in the wheelchair.
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well I'm glad you recovered.
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CooperKid248 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Yeah. I was in the wheelchair for a few weeks and my ankle finally recovered, but the pain was still there. It wasn't as bad as it was before. You should've seen it. It was the second day of the school and I was clsoe to the room. All of a sudden, I felt that pain in the ankle and it stopped working. I screamed so loud that a whole bunch of teachers and students were looking to see what had happened.
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