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        You stood alone, in a room full of people you didn't know. Your heart was pounding so hard you could feel it in every part of your body. Your palms were sweaty and your mouth was dry. You could hear the sounds of your parade going on outside. You sighed inwardly. "Why did I agree to this, I'm not cut out to be a Queen." The large wooden doors of the room you were in opened in unison letting a bright beam of sunlight come streaming in. You squinted your eyes and looked out over the horizon. There were people everywhere, animals too. All marching, dancing and preforming in your honor. None of this helped ease your nerves. One of the many people rushing about let you know it was time for you to make your entrance. You nodded and made your way to the highest balcony, where you found Egypt was waiting.

"Good morning." He gave you a bright smile. "Did you enjoy your parade?" He took your hand in his and gently kissed your fingers.

You nodded. "Yes, but isn't a bit much? I mean, I don't think I deserve all this."

"Of course you deserve it." His smile widened. "You're going to be the Queen, my Queen,  you deserve the best." The parade stopped and a loud blast of trumpets were played followed by a mighty uproar of applause. You thought you might pass out.  "Ready?" He squeezed your hand tight and led you where everyone could see you. The people cheered even louder, throwing things in the air and setting off little fireworks. Egypt made a very short speech in your honor, the things he said made you blush, you weren't worthy of all or any of this praise. "I won't ask her to speak to you all today, this is all very new to her and I'd rather not lose her before she's crowned. So, I think we should go ahead with the crowning." The crowd cheered again. The crown was placed on your head and the loudest of applause's yet went up. Egypt kissed you. "Thank you, my Queen."

You shook your head. "No, thank you."

He looked a little confused. "For what?"

You laughed. "For not making me speak in front of everyone, I would have died."

Egypt joined you in laughter. "I thought you might, you'll get used to it after a while though. As my wife and queen, it's something that will become very natural over time."

"Yeah, I guess you're...wait your what?" You're eye's widened. "What did you say about being your wife?"

Egypt slowly moved you both away from the public eye. "You're my wife. I thought you understood. When you become queen, you become my wife. I'm sorry, I should have been more clear." A worried look covered his face. "You can't have a Queen and a King that rule separately."

You were still in total shock, but you knew he was right. "No, you were clear. I guess with everything going on I just wasn't thinking clearly."

He was obviously embarrassed now. "Well I just don't want you to feel like I'm forcing you into something." He blushed. "Just because we're legally married doesn't mean anything has to happen you know. For now I think we should just get you comfortable talking to the people."

"I agree." You hugged him tight. "I gained a kingdom, and a husband all in one day. I think today may have been the most successful day of my life."
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SinfullKitty Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I fangirled....and my mom walked in and gave me a wtf face :'D
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bettttttt Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
not as bad if your dad catches you reading ruscn smut
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Rayres03 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My Brother Did That Too 
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nekosicily927 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This was ... AWESOME :D
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jaydee0527 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Writer
C'est très bon.
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MarioFanfiction Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
When I read the word wife, I fangirled internally. When Egypt explained, I fangirled externally.
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Demonicwolfheart89 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
The same thing happened to me...
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Iwantcandy987 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's the best explanation in the history of ever
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DeathxMaka1 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
cute!!!!!!!!!!
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harlie15234 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Student Filmographer
I died
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xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
.:blush:. This was wonderful!~
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arletteyspaghetti Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student
I have a perfect husband unf♥
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neverlostneverfound Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist
AH SO CUTE >.< :blamblam: Freaky Feelings 
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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
your so adorable Eygpt, still not as mouch as Italy/ Feli
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Katlover2219 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
Blush emoticon Soo... cute X3 Cute Emoticon Blushing 
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute ^w^
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Lol XD
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AngelicRose1 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh. My. God. I showed this to my BFF during recess and she squealed so loud that my classmates were like: :iconwtfplz:
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ExtraordinaryPlanet Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And this all started from Americas closet. :3
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The most successful day of my life. Truest statement EVER.
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fioleeshadamy411 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student Artist
SHOCKER
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mex10233 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
:grump: i always read part 2 before part one butttt i like the story :#1:
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:iconmadibear6:
madibear6 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconegyptplz: CUTENESSCUTENESS
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germanpuppydog Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Part 3!!!! :iconmegustaplz: :iconsexyegyptplz:
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That is an option ^^ I have a poll for requests if you'd like one. ^^
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:icongermanpuppydog:
germanpuppydog Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
But I thought it was closed
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Requests are closed, polls are open. Hetalia and Naruto are poll based, so they're always open.
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:icongermanpuppydog:
germanpuppydog Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I vote yes
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Gekko73 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
Part 3!!
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It will more than likely happen, poll soon!
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nekootakugirl Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
egypt doesn't get enough love ;w;
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DreamerRenuki Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
That would defiantly be the most successful day of my life because the Internet is usually my life
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Singer-Of-Light Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting choice of second-person narrative. :)
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ImaNinjaWizard Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course I'm Egypt's queen! I love Egypt! :3
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Pikachu5091 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Hell yeah! I'm Egypt's Queen!!! o3o No wait.... I'm Romano's Queen too! And America's!!!! Oh no!!! What am I gonna do? I know, sleep... But before that.. Awesome fic!!! Make part 3 and you know.... It should be interesting ;)
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
As many requests as I've received, in less than a day, it's gonna happen.
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:iconpikachu5091:
Pikachu5091 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Yay!!!!*happy dance*
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Umioko Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Will there be a part 3? This is well written - I really loved it!
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i've had a ton of requests, so prolly
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:iconumioko:
Umioko Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hopefully! ; U ;
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Vampire-Hinata-112 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, how cute!
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Vampire-Hinata-112 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem!
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RenjiLuv2 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
This was so cuuute!~ part2 plz?!?!!
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koujakulation Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
This IS a part 2. A second half, read the description please
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RenjiLuv2 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
I did. >~< I meant like this need a part two because the smih was a separate story and this should be continued if you get my drift.
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're more than fine ^^ I have plenty of ppl that think this is a part 1. Sorry others feel the need to be rude. BTW, thank you for reading my story, and I'm very glad you liked it!
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RenjiLuv2 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Your...welocome?
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed, I was upset with the person being rude to you XD
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