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       You stepped outside your car, making your way to America's door. The loud sound of the music could already be heard, even from where you were. You didn't bother to knock on the door, no one would have ever heard you, the sounds from the party were just too loud. As soon as you walked in America tackled you in a hug. “Oh hey. I didn't think you would get everyone here on such sort notice.” You smiled wide and hugged him back.

“Of course I can dude. Nobody knows how to throw a party like I do. I'm America.” He laughed loud enough to compensate for the ear shattering music. “Anyway dude, we need to get you on the dance floor. You look even more sexy than usual tonight.” He winked at you and took your arm, leading you to the makeshift dance floor.

Complements like that still made you blush. Even though it wasn't at all uncommon for America to complement you, it always left you red faced and with nothing to say. Everyone you knew was already there, either eating or dancing or talking. You couldn't remember America ever throwing a party this big before. Even more odd, was there didn't seem to be a real reason for it. “America, why are all these people here? Is there something special going on today?”

America laughed. “No dude. I don't need a reason to part with my girl.” He brought you close to him and started to dance. But if there was a special reason, I probably wouldn't tell you. Just to keep you wondering you know?” He kissed your cheek and smiled.

“Well that's just great, isn't it? Now I'm even more curious than I was before.” You sighed, but didn't pry any further. You knew it wouldn't work anyway.

After a while of dancing and snacking and talking to just about everyone at the party, America called everyone to attention. “Hey dudes, I want to thank you all for coming to my super awesome party and making it even more awesome and memorable. Now, for the real reason I brought you all here, which everyone but one person knows.” America looked straight at you with a sweet smile. “I really hope this goes the way I planned or I'm going to look like a total moron.” He laughed and pulled you in the middle of the crowd with him. “As smart as you are I was afraid you'd have found me out.”

You stood nervously with him in front of everyone, feeling like your legs were going to collapse under you. “What's going on?”

America answered by dropping to one knee in front of everyone. He was blushing pretty bad, as he fumbled around his pocket, eventually he pulled out a red, white, and blue box. “I know, the box is a little cheesy, but I kind of liked it.” He blushed even worse than before. “You were right all along, there was a special reason for this party. I wanted to ask you to marry me, in front of everyone I know.” He smiled as he opened the box, revealing the ring he picked for you. “I thought maybe the pressure would make it harder for you to say no.”

“I wouldn't have said no anyway.” You dropped down to America and hugged him tight. “You really didn't have to do this in front of everyone. It's a little embarrassing.”

“Dude, I totally had to ask you in front of everyone. Now everyone knows no to try anything with you.” America gave you a quick kiss. “Because if they do, they'll have to answer to me.” He slipped the ring on your finger and kissed you again. “Now I need to throw another party because you said yes.” He laughed. “I have a feeling we're going to be partying a lot in the near future.”

“I have to say I'm quite proud of you America. I never thought you'd grow up enough to even consider marriage.” Britain cleared his throat. “Good luck to both of you.”

“Dude Britain, why you talking like you're never going to see me again? I totally need you to be my best man brah.” America hit Britain on the back. “We're going to be stuck together nonstop for a while.”

Britain stiffened. “I'm not sure if I should be honored by this news, or if I should be completely terrified.”

America laughed as he brought you back into his arms and held you tight. “Both dude, definitely both.”
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allyvania88 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Love this one, also love the Austria one (reading by country alphabetically)
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princess-snow-wolf Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
“Both dude, definitely both.”
you dear writer are very witty, very witty indeed.
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5had0w-pr1nc3550102 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
i loved the fact thaat poor england should be honored and terrified~ 
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LunaKittyArtist99 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Artist
Dude you suck, I read this one first. You should have put part three in the total or something
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TaviBoLock Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha sucks.
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LunaKittyArtist99 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student Artist
meh.....
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MarioFanfiction Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Francis, if I hear a wolf whistle, you an your little trio are all toast, capishe?
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1pc9 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist
;)
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hetalialover72 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Oh England you dog
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AmazingEmily9999 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
Oh, England.
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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
why does he keep calling me dude?
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KnockoutsSister Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cause we do it like a dude -3-
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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
ok
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KnockoutsSister Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
.3.
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imaterribledrawer Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
awww that's adorable!
xD Love England's reaction
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Chrysti-the-goddess Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That was awesome.
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germanpuppydog Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Why is it that whenever I look up lemons *ahem that can stay a secret* your stories pop up
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know. . None of my stuff is lemonish, and I don't use "lemon" as a tag.
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germanpuppydog Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
It's weird.
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Le-Mr-Mustache Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
I LOVE IT!! I LOVE YOU AMERICA!
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pizzaangel10 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
I'm torn between Britain and america!
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Awwww Alfred, you sweetie~!
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Lindori-chan Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...I read one,
saw the second, spazzed out,
read it, died of cuteness,
saw a third,
read it, THANK YOU! :iconhappytearsplz:
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InvaderDarkcomet Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
Loud music? New York was here. :D
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worldsbiggestotaku Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
I'm married...to my own country...KYAAA! :iconitssofluffyplz: :iconsqueeeeplz:
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AnzhelinaMenshutkin Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student
Me too. :iconstunplz: :iconspazzattackplz:
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KandyRain Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013   Artist
Haha poor England, he is terrified! xD
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fioleeshadamy411 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student Artist
poor britain usuk will still live on but you just broke my heart there vampire godesnyx
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skating-wally Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
haha that ending totally made me giggle :D be afraid Britain... be very afraid!
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thecrazygirlwhokill Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
I agree lol
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princessminight Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
Lol the ending
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Bluefur101 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
8D you have made one happy girl right now!!!
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nightbloom589 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
same here
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Bluefur101 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Oh my gosh I love your signature! XD
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nightbloom589 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
thx
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Bluefur101 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
Lol sorry, I just found it so true XD
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nightbloom589 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
;3
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Clannadlover11 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconsqueeeeplz: That was really cute!!!! Love all of your stories so far!!!! :iconmoesmileplz:
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Briarfox13 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's cute

I love England's line at the end "I'm not sure if I should be honored, or terrified by that"

It's really good, as are your other Seven Minutes in Hetalia Heaven and their follow on's (I'm slowly working my way through them-love them)
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^ thank you. i'm glad you like them
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Briarfox13 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's okay ^^
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LuckyStaar121 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student General Artist
That ending was hilarious...love it soooo much.
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