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        "Well then, what about we ride the Ferris wheel? Not too high, no big drops, and not fast at all." Netherlands squeezed your hand and smiled. "If you can't handle that, I don't know why we came to the fair today."

Not wanting to seem like a total loser, you nodded. "Yeah, sure, I can do the Ferris wheel. No problem."

Your act wasn't fooling anyone, but he nodded. "Okay, then what are we waiting for?" He grabbed you a candy apple to eat on the ride and shot off with you to the Ferris wheel. "Good thing there's no line, I hate waiting in lines." The two of you were escorted to your seats and strapped in. "You still feeling okay? You haven't touched your apple." He rubbed your knee in an attempt to be supporting.

"Oh I'm just fine, just wanted to save it for the ride." You took a bite.

"If you say so, but you know we can still get off the ride if you want, it hasn't started yet." The giant wheel began to move. "Whoops, never mind, you're stuck on it now. But hey, it's not that bad, at least you're stuck on it with me." He smiled wide, pulled you into a hug and stole a bite of your apple. "Dang, why is it that fair food is always so good?"

You had fallen completely silent. It wasn't the height or even the motion of the ride that was getting to you, it was all the strange noise. The creaking of all the metal gears, rubbing and grinding against each other. The whistling of the wind, and that popping, clicking noise that was coming from god only knew where.

Netherlands waved his hand in front of your face. "You aren't talking again, or even moving. You're just kind of staring off into space. You know we're almost at the top. Why don't you look around and figure out what you want to do next. Or is it actually the height that has you messed up?"

You slowly shook your head. "No, not the height, the sound."

"Sound, I don't hear anything weird." He scratched the back of his head.  "Maybe I just need to help you get your mind off of things hmm?" With one smooth, quick motion, Netherlands removed you from your spot next to him and sat you on his lap to face him. "And I think I know just how to do that." He moved his mouth to your neck and nibbled all the way up to your mouth. His hands were busy trying to unlatch your bra.

The shock and surprise made you drop your almost untouched candy apple to the floor. "H-hey, you promised you wouldn't disrobe me in public anymore." You tried pushing his arms out of your shirt, but he was much too strong for you.

Netherlands laughed in your ear as he nibbled at it. "I'm not disrobing you, and really, who can see you way up here? It's just you and me, alone on a Ferris wheel." He succeed in removing your bra, and cupped your breast in his hand. You let out a small, quiet gasp. He went for you pants, but had to stop,  the ride was already over. "See, I made you forget you were scared didn't I?"

You rushed off the Ferris wheel, face aflame, still trying to fix your clothing. "Well yeah I guess, I still don't like those things though."

Netherlands let out a loud laugh and took hold of your hand, giving it a playful squeeze. "Really? Strange, for some reason, I think it's become my favorite ride in the park."
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SenpaiHasNoticed Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student Writer
Adorable, I love you for this! Marionette Fnaf Gif 
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Ferrets4ever Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The Monkey With the Nosebleed Nosebleed Nosebleedfall    so cute!
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Cutiepue Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
*nosebleed!*
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BlackNovaWolf Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Netherlands you're so sneaky XD
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:iconmidnaplayer:
MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Kyuu~ Netherlands, you're almost as bad as France XD
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elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
he's a raper like him but my raper
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MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:icondeathstareplz: :iconxdddplz:
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:iconelyanaxlevilove:
elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:rape: 
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:iconmidnaplayer:
MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
omg theres an icon for that!? XDDD
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:iconelyanaxlevilove:
elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ya just put rape
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tomato-kitten Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
should I be concerned it said "you promised you wouldn't disrobe me in public ANYMORE"  lol
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WuerdGirl Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Student General Artist
I died at that part
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Kit-Kit-Ridge Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Netherlands, please be a perfect gentleman... at least in public. ;)

THAT MEANS NO PUBLIC INDECENCY!
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iHaruka Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Omg hahaha Netherlands lol

Hahaha jij sneaky man XD
Leuke verhaal!

Nice story!
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:iconscotgaelicvalkyrie27:
nice Netherlands....:D (Big Grin) you sneaky, sneaky man Hug
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Kswagg980 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That sneaky..........
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Drama4myFUTURE Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You sneaky, sneaky man... IT WAS STILL IN PUBLIC, THOUGH! ^J^ Though, I can't say that I minded...
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bettyq2727 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Netherlands....YOU SNEEKY SNEEKY BASTERD XD
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KyoSohmaAndEdwardElr Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:icongrillfaceplz: R-REALLY DUDE!?!
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:iconcomputernosebleedplz: T-Tim! O////O (Your still my Favorite Tim<3)
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TheGodofAwesomeX2 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Netherlands you naughty boy
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askserra Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
^/////^
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xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcomputernosebleedplz: <--- Nuff said XD
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Cilla123 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
When they say their afraid of heights, you're actually afraid of falling down :iconimdedplz:. (duh :iconorzplz:)
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tigereyes13 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
Actually some people are afraid of heights, not falling. I'm fine with falling, I just hate heights.
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BritishAccent520 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student General Artist
0//0 ('nuff said)
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sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
i can't make icons but i can make blush faces XD 0/////0
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconspain-nosebleed:
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Lemon-Hetalia Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
*holds out a huge tissue* Ma'am/sir I believe there is a leak.
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Gratzie!

((and its Ma'am))
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Liveyourlifetwice32 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconpervplz:
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Dumghost Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
I... I love my country... >\\\\\<
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sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
virtual high five i am from the Nether lands too XD
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Dumghost Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
Yeah! :iconhigh-fiveplz: xD
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sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
i am moving back in........maybe 9 years?
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Dumghost Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
I shall be waiting... *v*
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ok XD
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Dumghost Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
Hehe xD
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sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist
na nuo it means your cool in choa
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Reading Hetalia x Reader Lemons

Near others: :iconswedenstareplz:
Alone: :iconspazattackplz:
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so true~
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bdolphin15 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So accurate!!!!
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Exactly the same for me
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awww... He's so mean but I love him. :icononionxdplz:
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fioleeshadamy411 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Student Artist
kinky as hell where can i find him?
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CrazyFandomSlut Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student General Artist
True story...last year at my cities Flower Festival Me and :iconcookiemonsternom333: went on the Ferris wheel and got scared well me mostly -is afraid of heights-
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I fel in love with my country~~
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torakisara Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013   Photographer
..i shouldnt read this when im dead tired..perverted mind in over drive..oh..god*nose bleeds and faints*
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XD
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torakisara Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013   Photographer
damn woman u broke me :P
good story
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