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        Excited it was finally your turn to play, you quickly placed your hand in the bucket and began feeling around. Almost immediately something sticky, and squishy covered your hand. "Oh my god, what is this?" You pulled your hand out of the bucket, an unknown substance was covering your fingers. "Anyone want to tell me what this is?"

Tobi rushed up. "That's my dango, the stick should still be in the bucket somewhere." He reached in the bucket and fished out his stick. "Found it." He giggled. "Okay, now what?" He wrapped his arms around you and cuddled you in a hug.

"You two go into the closet, for seven minutes." Jiraiya handed you something to clean yourself up with. "Here you go." He then led you both to the closet and opened the door. "Have fun now. And don't let his adorable innocence lure you to the dark side. Be strong." With his warning, he shut and locked the door.

"He thinks I'm adorable." Tobi giggled. "You're pretty cute yourself. I bet my senpai would like you, but I won't let him have you. Nope, I think I'll keep you all to myself. Tobi needs some more friends, especially pretty lady friends." He was hugging you again, snuggling you tight and rubbing his masked face against your cheek.

Clearing your throat, you asked him the all important question. "So, I don't suppose there's any chance of you taking your mask off while we're in here is there?"

Tobi gasped. "Of course not, why would you even ask such a thing. I haven't even taken my mask off in front of Deidara senpai. Gee, I don't understand why everyone wants Tobi to take his mask off. Aren't I good enough as just an adorable pumpkin headed ninja?"

"Of course you are, I was just curious, I'm sorry. Forget I said anything." Now you felt bad for even asking.

He laughed again. "I'm just kidding, I'm not angry. Masks make everybody suspicious, so, if you close your eyes for just a second, I'll give you a little peek."

"O-oh okay, sure." You quickly shut your eyes tight.

"Okay, you can open them." You opened your eyes, Tobi was still wearing his mask. "I hope you're ready for this." Slowly he removed his mask. "Tada! What do you think, not half bad looking am I?" You were looking at the back of his head.

"That's not even funny Tobi." You really wanted to hit him for getting your hopes up so high.

"Deidara senpai didn't think so either." He replaced the mask on the correct side of his face and turned around. Maybe I need some new tricks.

Jiraiya opened up the door. "You two have fun? No swapping sides or anything right? Right, good."

You and Tobi left the closet to find Deidara waiting for you. "He got you with the back of the head trick too didn't he? I say we hold him down and unmask him, I don't know why we haven't done it yet. I think it's high time we found out what he looks like, yeah."

Tobi gasped. "No senpai, you can't. Especially if you can't catch me!" He took off running.

"You know, that might have actually worked if you hadn't just blurted out your plan." Sasori shook his head.

Deidara crossed his arms, giving Sasori an aggravated look. "Hm, shut up my man, no one asked you."
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SheilaNomnom Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015

Love this
laurenki95 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014
It was the best moment..deidara and tobi...I really miss this team :(
NekodaTheHedgehog86 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014
If Tobi ever asked me to join the Akatsuki I would not hesitate to say yes. He's just that adorable Heart Love 
DarknessSorceress Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014
That beginning part should be a shirt. 'Come To The Dark Side We Have Tobi.'

It made me laugh a little.
sarunaru-otaku-ninja Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
All of your seven minutes heavens are so awesome and I think that they're so accurate too. Most people give their smih a lot of interaction time and it makes unrealistic (dont worry I love those ones as well) but your ones are short and sweet
JuliaAbadeer-Uchiha Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Crazy funny man-child Tobi is the version of him I prefer. Great job. This made me laugh.
cytez-kaimee Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
moonclaws2324 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
OOHHH MY GOOODDD SOOO CUUUTE!!!! Adorable pumpkin headed ninja!!!! PERFECT!!!!
coolstuntgirl1 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Artist
Love it :3

OkamiWolf122 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Maybe Tobi could have turned his mask side ways revealing only the lower half of his face or something, idk I is dumb! :icontobidanceplz:
nancytheartist Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
SilentLove832 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lets just use methylin t knock him out, take his mask, and hide it.
tobis-sister Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Love it. forget being nice. Let's beat Tobi up, tie him up, unmask him, heal him with Sakura's medical jutsu, erase his memory, and drop him off near his hideout.
Love how he shows you the back of his head! ^_^
KitsuneWerdio Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
:icontobidanceplz: : YOU WILL NEVER SEE MY FACE
Me: hmmmm
:icontobidanceplz: : what re you doing
Me: thinking what your face would look like.
AScarletmoon17 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: :icontobiplz: :heart:
moonprincess4 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sniff* I miss good Tobi evil Obito is no cute
kitty-33 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
heh so cute! :icontobidanceplz:
sasukeisAjerk Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
sasukeisAjerk Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
ShikonNoMiko Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
KitsuneWerdio Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
NightShadeLover Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
Well crap I think i'm going to the Akatsuki
inyurasha Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
I fell in love with a akaski member
Kipiekie2 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
Lol ... I think I just fell in love with a second akaski member.... Great.... Well it was pretty cute :3
cherrysaki Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
your not a pumpkin ur my sweet sweet lollipop tobi =^_^=
CuteCat213 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Who's this character on you profile icon?
cherrysaki Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014
Flaky from happy tree friends
Nanda093 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
"Aren't I good enough as just an adorable pumpkin headed ninja?" AAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA Yeah, you are, I miss the Tobi from those times...
KawaiiKoneko97 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is adorable! :3 Tobi's character is perfect here. Nice work! :heart:
wolfplusanima Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
*tackles Tobi, pinning him down* Now Deidara! Take off his mask!
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Tobi is so cute ^w^ :icontobi2plz:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
WovenWinterBreezeKK Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Run Tobi~! XD Love DeidaraX3
sweetpeach14 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that was so cute. And that was probably one of the best ive read for tobi. you got his personality perfect
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:icontobiplz: Yay! Thank you so much!
Demonic-Bamboo-Panda Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not even a little peck? QAQ
ZaSasuke Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yasaijiru7 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh! I love Tobi! He's so CUTE!!
aibi0608 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student
awww tobi why are you so cute ~~!! >w< *cuddle*
A-Mocha Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
XD I Love these! I've read quite a few of your stories! <3 ^^
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm glad you like them!
kittykatluvur777 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3 lets go do it deidara ^-^ i bet i can get tobi cornered *grins wickedly*
helpmeouthere Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013   Writer
I'll see his face one of these days when he's just his normal innocent self.
MSU82 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Ha, that was cute :heart:
TomatoBoxFairyFeli Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
heck yea tobi is totally cute!!!!!!!!!! -hugs tobi softly-
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