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        Excited it was finally your turn to play, you quickly placed your hand in the bucket and began feeling around. Almost immediately something sticky, and squishy covered your hand. "Oh my god, what is this?" You pulled your hand out of the bucket, an unknown substance was covering your fingers. "Anyone want to tell me what this is?"

Tobi rushed up. "That's my dango, the stick should still be in the bucket somewhere." He reached in the bucket and fished out his stick. "Found it." He giggled. "Okay, now what?" He wrapped his arms around you and cuddled you in a hug.

"You two go into the closet, for seven minutes." Jiraiya handed you something to clean yourself up with. "Here you go." He then led you both to the closet and opened the door. "Have fun now. And don't let his adorable innocence lure you to the dark side. Be strong." With his warning, he shut and locked the door.

"He thinks I'm adorable." Tobi giggled. "You're pretty cute yourself. I bet my senpai would like you, but I won't let him have you. Nope, I think I'll keep you all to myself. Tobi needs some more friends, especially pretty lady friends." He was hugging you again, snuggling you tight and rubbing his masked face against your cheek.

Clearing your throat, you asked him the all important question. "So, I don't suppose there's any chance of you taking your mask off while we're in here is there?"

Tobi gasped. "Of course not, why would you even ask such a thing. I haven't even taken my mask off in front of Deidara senpai. Gee, I don't understand why everyone wants Tobi to take his mask off. Aren't I good enough as just an adorable pumpkin headed ninja?"

"Of course you are, I was just curious, I'm sorry. Forget I said anything." Now you felt bad for even asking.

He laughed again. "I'm just kidding, I'm not angry. Masks make everybody suspicious, so, if you close your eyes for just a second, I'll give you a little peek."

"O-oh okay, sure." You quickly shut your eyes tight.

"Okay, you can open them." You opened your eyes, Tobi was still wearing his mask. "I hope you're ready for this." Slowly he removed his mask. "Tada! What do you think, not half bad looking am I?" You were looking at the back of his head.

"That's not even funny Tobi." You really wanted to hit him for getting your hopes up so high.

"Deidara senpai didn't think so either." He replaced the mask on the correct side of his face and turned around. Maybe I need some new tricks.

Jiraiya opened up the door. "You two have fun? No swapping sides or anything right? Right, good."

You and Tobi left the closet to find Deidara waiting for you. "He got you with the back of the head trick too didn't he? I say we hold him down and unmask him, I don't know why we haven't done it yet. I think it's high time we found out what he looks like, yeah."

Tobi gasped. "No senpai, you can't. Especially if you can't catch me!" He took off running.

"You know, that might have actually worked if you hadn't just blurted out your plan." Sasori shook his head.

Deidara crossed his arms, giving Sasori an aggravated look. "Hm, shut up my man, no one asked you."
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sarunaru-otaku-ninja Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
All of your seven minutes heavens are so awesome and I think that they're so accurate too. Most people give their smih a lot of interaction time and it makes unrealistic (dont worry I love those ones as well) but your ones are short and sweet
JuliaAbadeer-Uchiha Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Crazy funny man-child Tobi is the version of him I prefer. Great job. This made me laugh.
cytez-kaimee Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
moonclaws2324 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
OOHHH MY GOOODDD SOOO CUUUTE!!!! Adorable pumpkin headed ninja!!!! PERFECT!!!!
coolstuntgirl1 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Artist
Love it :3

OkamiWolf122 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Maybe Tobi could have turned his mask side ways revealing only the lower half of his face or something, idk I is dumb! :icontobidanceplz:
nancytheartist Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
SilentLove832 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lets just use methylin t knock him out, take his mask, and hide it.
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