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         Jiraiya walked around the room for a moment or two, then finally stopped at you. "You look like you're ready to play, am I right?" Before you'd even attempted to answer, he held out the large bucket for you.

"I am very ready to play, actually. I've been ready for a long, long time now." You felt around for a moment then, unable to wait any longer, pulled out a very small wooden block. "Oh, a Shogi piece. Shikamaru, is this yours?"

Shikamaru had fallen asleep on the couch while awaiting his turn. "Hey, get up, it's your turn." Choji jerked Shikamaru around, waking him from his nap.

"Huh? Oh, right, okay I'm going." Slowly and sleepily, Shikamaru walked over to the closet and sat on the floor."

"Try not to have too much fun with this guy. I know he's a real firecracker and all, but try to keep it clean." Jiraiya led you to the closet with a smile. "I'll see you both in seven minutes. And Shika, don't fall asleep on her okay?" The door was now shut and locked.

You found a place close to Shikamaru and sat down. "You can sleep if you want. I won't be upset. I'm pretty comfortable too, you can use me as a pillow."

Shikamaru shook his head apathetically. "No, it's fine. I was just bored out there. Not really a ton of fun to stare at a closet door for seven minutes, over and over again." What he said next shocked you a bit. "I'd actually like to enjoy my seven minutes in here. It could be nice you know. I won't have my mom breathing down my back." He looked over to you with a nonchalant look on his face. "If you don't want to, that's fine too." He shrugged.

"No, I want to. I mean we can." You blushed. "Either way's fine with me. Whatever you want to do." You were talking rather quickly, and probably annoying Shikamaru.

"Okay." That was, it, that's all he said. He moved closer to you and placed a rough hand on your cheek. Slowly he pressed his lips to yours and began kissing you. Your face lit on fire as he touched you. As gentle as he was, he was able to make you turn to mush. You wrapped your arms around his neck and kissed him deeper. Shikamaru let out a low moan that sent vibrations through your entire chest. You leaned into him, wanting to feel as much of him on you as possible. Shikamaru wrapped his arms around you tightly, pressing your entire bodies together, leaving no air space between them. He kissed all along your collar bone and neck sending shivers down your spine. The two of you heard the sound of the door unlock. "Pretend nothing happened." Shikamaru placed another quick kiss on your cheek and moved away from you.

Jiraiya opened the door. "Really you two? Nothing at all, not even a little cuddling in the dark? Gee you two are boring."

"Of course not. You know how my mom is. If I had touched her, I would have had to marry her." Shikamaru sighed.

"You have a very valid point there. I hadn't thought of that before." Jiraiya laughed. "Oh well, now get out of the closet. You're holding things up."

Shikamaru took your hand and led you out of the closet. "Thanks for not saying anything. My mom can be pretty crazy. I really have no idea why my dad married her at all."

"You two made out in there didn't you?" Choji was grinning ear to ear as he shoveled chips into his mouth. "I can tell because Shikamaru's actually kind of smiling. He doesn't smile unless he's done something he's not supposed to. But don't worry, I'll keep your secret, as long as you supply me with plenty of chips."

"I do that anyway Choji." Shikamaru sighed.
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:iconnoteviljustinsane:
NotEvilJustInsane Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Student Interface Designer
Choji: As long as you supply me with plenty of chips.

Shika: I do that anyway Choji

XD That had me laughing so hard 
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Doge-Chan Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I will find you, and I will steal your skills, Nyx. My Precious Skills.
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Hachidori-chan Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, we can get married anyway Shikamaru-kun! ;D
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Baliya Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Choji: :iconspongebobcameplz: You two made out in there didn't you?
XD that had me dying!
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Hottestanimechick Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
This is probably my favorite out of all your SMIH stories, and believe me, that's a lot said. :love:
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llSll Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
i love you
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nightfury150 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
Choji you know Shikamaru so well! ENVY
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Yaoilover1000ful Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
I TURNED INTO MUSH!! HAHAHAHA!!!
AAAh Shika how much I love you!
KFC Chicken Epic Dance Heart Love excited 
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TheGuardianofDragons Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student
Love the ending :)
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luchihahatsune Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
the last sentence... Unimpressed                 




Waving the lol flag 
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Shadowed-DarkNinja Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg this is awesome! You nailed shika's personality perfectly! :iconlovesqueeplz:
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:iconlittlemissjambu:
LittleMissJambu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
He's so sweet! I love it <3
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ShunakkeAndringa Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dead
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Kawa808 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Student General Artist
la in love Loved this one the most!
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RaintheepicXD Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
LOVED IT Shika's mum sounds cool lol :D XD :)
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Xx-Stereo--Hearts-xX Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
It amazes me how you can get the characters PERFECT! It makes the reading so enjoyable! All of this, it's just good ol' Shikamaru<3 Loved it!
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BecauseReasons Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:nosebleed: perfect characterization once again, I applaud you  XD
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babyfewd Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg i absolutely love this x3
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ranmas2 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
Dang it, that picture always kills me whenever I see it <3
Shikamaru was my first crush from Naruto.. I think
And my first favorite character ^^
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XDIloveAnimeXP Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
Cute
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OkamiWolf122 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
The picture at the top is pure perfection. Sets off just the right amount of pervyness that will happen XD
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Wubble-Chan Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
*Dead* :iconhnnghnosebleedplz: ..... I love this~! XD
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Caro-Hime5 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icongentlyshikamaruplz: I'll imagine it was this smile >.<
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KitsuneWerdio Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
SOOO CUTE!!!
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AScarletmoon17 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nice XD
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kitty-33 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ha the "pretend nothing happened" part. :iconderrplz:
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
Loved it :iconlaughingplz:
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sasukeisAjerk Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconshikamarurapefaceplz:
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Darklinksminion Featured By Owner May 17, 2013
lolz short, cute and clever

love it!
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Midnight-in-the-city Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Student Writer
Did anyone else think of throwing the chogi piece at shikamaru after realizing he's asleep?
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SailorMusic57 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist
I thought I was the only one :3
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:iconmidnight-in-the-city:
Midnight-in-the-city Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Student Writer
Yeah I'm not the only one with anger management issues! Happy fun day!
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SailorMusic57 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist
YAY :3
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dead-dolleyes Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
Oooo, Shika-chan is quite the bad boy :eyes:
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Kipiekie2 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
Lol the first story thing I've read where ur not caught doing anything ... Nice job tho
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Nanda093 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Looved it!! ^_^ Shikamaru, honey, you can eet me in a closet anytime ;D
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Nanda093 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
*meet
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TheUnknownDerp Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
:shyblushplz: squeeee
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NinjaPixels Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol I think you meant :iconshyblushplz:
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TheUnknownDerp Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
leave me alone ;-; -rolls over in shame- DARN YOU TYPOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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NinjaPixels Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww. :iconglomp2plz: It's okay, we all fail sometimes. Me a lot more than most people... :XD:
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TheUnknownDerp Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
;-; otay...
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Cyberwolf14 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
so kool!!! ^___^ hahaha
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moshiemoshieMOSH Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my.. I am so gonna tell his mom.
*Evil laugh*
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KawaiiKoneko97 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student Filmographer
I loved reading this. X3 :heart:
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Puppypancake Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Lol
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wolfplusanima Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
So, if I told his mom we'd have to get married? *evil grin*
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Kiba-Love-11 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
:iconloveloveplz: This one was just as good and romantic and dreamy as the Kiba one. :iconloveloveplz:
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WovenWinterBreezeKK Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, Choji!
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kiyacookies456 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icongrillfaceplz: I love this story~ :iconloveloveplz:
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