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         Jiraiya called you up to the middle of the room and held out the large bucket for you. You pressed your hand through the items and felt around for only a few seconds before something rather interesting got your attention. After removing it from the bucket, you gave it a closer look. It was a small piece of wood, with very intricate carvings on it. The detail and time, that some had  put into this amazed you. As you looked up to ask who it belonged  to, Sasori appeared in front of you. You jumped. "God, you scared me."

"That's my item. You can keep it though. I  couldn't get it how I wanted it." Sasori began walking to the closet. "No matter, I can always try again."

Jiraiya placed a hand on your shoulder as he walked with you to the closet. "Careful of that one. He's a smooth talker, I wouldn't want to lose you to him." He gave you a serious look as you walked into the closet. "I'll see you in seven minutes, don't disappoint me." With his warning, he shut and locked the door.

"You must hate it, living to please others. An existence where ones first priorities are not their own, cannot be pleasant." Sasori looked at you with his head cocked to the side, a slight grin on his face. "You should care more about what makes you happy, and less about what others perceive as right. Of course, none of this means anything to me. I feel nothing."

"Really? You don't feel anything? Nothing at all?" You began poking Sasori all over. "Wouldn't that be dangerous? I mean what if you caught on fire or something?"

Sasori's eye twitched. "Did you hear nothing I just said?" His voice was still monotone, but you could tell you had annoyed him.

"Sure I heard you. But just because my life makes other people happy doesn't mean I'm not happy. People should get joy out of helping others or making others happy. If everyone was self centered and didn't care about anyone else, we'd live in a really awful world. Now really, you can't feel anything?" You ruffled up his hair and squeezed his cheeks.

A slight sigh left his mouth. "No, nothing at all. It made things easier and more productive when it came to fighting. Now please stop messing up my hair." Sasori grabbed your hands and pulled you in front of him. "You're rather hyper, much like most females." He sighed again.

"What's wrong with that? You're rather apathetic, much like most puppets." You grinned. "So even though you can't feel, I'm not leaving the closet without at least a kiss from you." Before Sasori had a chance to even process what you had said, you were kissing him. Just as you had expected, he didn't respond to your kiss. "I guess I'll have to be satisfied with that."

Jiraiya opened the door. "Good, you two are still alive, I don't know why I was so worried." He laughed.

Sasori held out his hand to help you up. He didn't say anything else to you after your turn was over, but you overheard him talking to Deidara. "I might need to find a way to make myself feel again. The more I think about it, the more I think it was a bad idea to take away all my feeling."

Deidara's eyes went flat. "Don't lie Sasori my man. We all know why you want to feel again. You just came out of a closet with a girl who did god only knows what to you, and you couldn't feel any of it. You can't fool me." He shook his head.
I'd like to dedicate this to my little sister :iconretartedfangirl22:
She loves Sasori a lot. ^^

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chxnbaek Featured By Owner May 22, 2015  New Deviant
Deidara deserves his own talk show.
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CanadaAndAntarctica Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015
THIS IS AMAZING X3
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Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist
Me: I want to mess up his hair O.O
Friend: your so crazy-_-
Me: but it would be fun :P
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Maddi1472 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Student Writer
ahhhhh! Loved it!! Yasuko Takasu (Fangirling) [V1] 
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Aphy-Taffy Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
What Deidara said
I can't
xD
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galewings Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That picture

that smile


HNNNNGGGGG
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TatianaRae Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha!! :D The ending was pretty funny in my opinion! What Deidara said anyway. It made me laugh! :D Love the story! Now Im going to go read the other parts! :)
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AnimeHugsKisses Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"Don't lie Sasori my man. We all know why you want to feel again. You just came out of a closet with a girl who did god only knows what to you, and you couldn't feel any of it. You can't fool me." xP
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Lunarblaze12 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha! Sasori XD
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ShunakkeAndringa Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I made Sasori want to feel..ME!!
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coolstuntgirl1 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Artist
Lol
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deideiblueeyez Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love touching boys' hair, especially if it's bristly from a crew cut :meow: .. Just run my hand through those red locks, LOL XD .. 
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galewings Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that, was, amazing. : D
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ColdAsSnow Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm melting :squee:  that's just so cute!
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skylarluna Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
Hehe my friend was like "hey,Skye what would you do if you were stick in closet with sasori?" (Pervert grin)
Me: "MESS UP HIS HAIR!!" ●ω●
friend: -_- "really?"
Me: "YESH"
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WaveWatch5128 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
I agree with you 
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BecauseReasons Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
>X^D Oh, sweet-potatoes! You nailed their characters perfectly. BaHAAaahahaha! Especially Deidara at the end--pfft--ahahahaahaa! I liked reading it, I haven't laughed this much in a long while. 
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AnimeMusicLuver Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
xD lolz, AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! X3
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hannah12987 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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thelionesskira Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013   Traditional Artist
lol holy crap!!!!!!!!!
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KitsuneWerdio Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
OMG YOU AND HER, ARE SISTERS!?!? :O NO WONDER YOUR GUYS ARE BOTH SO TALENTED!!!
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is a weird. You submitted this comment on my birthday :floating:
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hannah12987 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lucky!!
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:D

THANK YOU!!!
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hannah12987 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome! :)
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:D
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hannah12987 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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KitsuneWerdio Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
Lol, well, happy late birthday
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
YAY!!! THANK YOU!!!!!
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KitsuneWerdio Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
your welcome
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I'm really happy now :D
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:iconkitsunewerdio:
KitsuneWerdio Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Bet you are
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:D
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michakrahiemsmaki Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY OC!! YOU BROUGHT TO SASORI WANTING HIS FEELINGS AGIAN!!
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kitty-33 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A-MAAAZING
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NicHeartsYou Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Student Interface Designer
Awesome! I love it! ;3
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AkasunaYuki3 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
:Lmao: i love this
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Nanda093 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Kyaaaaaaa~ LOVED IT! Especially the ending *--*
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KawaiiKoneko97 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD I love this. :3 Especially the ending. X3
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utapri23 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Sasori is a smooth talker xD
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TD-stadsforTailsdoll Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:turbopoke: So you can't feel any if this Sasori?
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Itz Neji and his 64 palms thing!
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TD-stadsforTailsdoll Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wut?
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
coz your emocion is being poked
Neji does that with his 64 palm thing. He pokes you repetively :squee:
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OkamiAmatrusui Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fail xD
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Phoenix-Fire-4 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
XD I would do that.
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XD
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