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         “I choose you, for the next player.” Jiraiya pointed straight at you. “Come on up here, I'm sure you're pretty tired of waiting. I know I'm getting tired of hosting.” He laughed as you made your way to him.

“Nah, it's not so bad. Just built up my anticipation.” You placed your hand inside the bucket and mixed up the items. Something very small stuck to the center of your hand. It was so small, you weren't even sure if it was a pick-able item. Still, you decided to lift it from the bucket. The item was a very small, very white flower with a pale blue center. “Wow, this is really pretty.”

“Thank you, it's a flower from my village. It's rather rare.” Haku smiled sweetly at you and joined you in the center of the room.

“It is a really pretty flower. It seems anything with any kind of real beauty is rare.” Jiraiya laughed at himself. “Listen to me, I sound like an old woman.” He shook his head. “Let's get you two into the closet before I say something else stupid.” Jiraiya led you and Haku to the closet and let you both inside. “See you both in seven minutes now. Have fun.” He shut and locked the door behind him, leaving you alone with Haku.

Haku was obviously excited about being able to participate. He was smiling wide, rocking back and forth. You could almost feel his happiness. “I've never done anything like this before, so I am a bit over excited.” He smiled and blushed, raising his shoulders into a little shrug.

“That's okay, nothing wrong with getting a little excited every once and a while. I've never done anything like this either, the Leaf's always too busy.” You slowly scooted closer to him as you spoke.

“Well then, I guess it will be both of our first times then. We'll have to make it memorable then, wont we?” The sweetest of smiles lit up his face, spreading to his eyes as he moved close to you. “You don't mind do you?”

“No, not at all.” You blushed at his question.

“Okay, just have to make sure you know. I wouldn't want you upset with me.” Haku very gently brushed your cheek with his fingertips, outlining your chin, continuing down your neck and tracing your collar bone. His actions deepened the blush already present on your face. “I wish it wasn't so dark in here. You're too beautiful to keep hidden in a dark closet like this.” Haku rested his hand on the nape of your neck. When he finally kissed you, it was so gentle you could barely feel it. You wrapped your arms around him, pulling him a bit closer, and in turn, deepening the kiss. You could feel Haku blush as you did, but he didn't stop you from doing what ever you wanted to.

The door slowly creaked open a moment later, letting in a bright beam of light. “Hey you two, your time's all up. You're going to have to stop sucking on each others face now.” Jiraiya opened the door fully and turned on the light, exposing you and Haku to the rest of the group.

“I'm sorry.” Haku quickly helped you up and out of the closet. “I hope I didn't embarrass you. I know you probably didn't want to be seen making out with the enemy.” He blushed.

“Nah, it's okay. There have been plenty of girls before me who have done the exact same thing.” You smiled. “Some of them even got kidnapped.” You laughed nervously.

“Oh, is that so? Wait here for just a second if you don't mind.” Haku ran off, returning with Zabuza. “Sorry in advance, but you did give me the idea.” Following Haku's request, Zabuza lifted you from the ground and threw you over his shoulder, carrying you from the room.

“She didn't even try to fight back.” Jiraiya sighed. “We need to do something to make the Leaf a better place, or at least get better looking men. Our kunoichi are leaving us at any given chance.”
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:iconascarletmoon17:
Mood: Love ~AScarletmoon17 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
That was a lot cuter then I expected it to be :heart: good work
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Mood: Humor ~AnnBrinet Jun 8, 2013  New member
Loved the ending. Jiraiya was funny!
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Mood: Love ~Nikx15 Jun 4, 2013  New member
Very cute.
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:iconmclcastielluver:
I'm not gonna fight back! I'm being kidnapped by one of the hottest anime guys ever! OF COURSE I'M NOT FIGHTING BACK! :la:
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:iconskylarluna:
Ikr?!?! I'M NOT GONNA FIGHT IT
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~neko-lover22 May 31, 2013  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Yea!! party!! Never coming back!!
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:iconxxpadalover269800xx:
Jiraaiya why would I fight the hottest naruto dude?
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~SpyroOandOcynder Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
With someone like guy sensei in the village, I would run off too x) hehe
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:iconwolfplusanima:
"She didn't even try to fight back." Why would I? I'm being kidnaped by one of the best anime character of all time, who is also very cute, and I'm supposed to fight back?
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