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         "Come on up here with me and play beautiful, it's your turn now." Jiraiya signaled you to the center of the room.

You walked up to the bucket and started feeling around. There was way too much stuff in there to really give this any thought. You decided to just grab something. After raising it up out of the bucket you looked at it. In your hand was a small clay heart that had been intricately painted. "Deidara, is this yours?"

"Hm? Yeah, it is, my man Sasori painted it though. I don't have time for that." He stood up from the couch and started walking towards the closet. "I'd be careful with that heart though, it's made of c4, so it will explode, yeah."

Jiraiya looked a little nervous. "I'll take that deadly heart off of your hands. Being locked in the closet with an Akatsuki member is going to be dangerous enough." He carefully took the heart from you and led you to the closet. "Have fun in there, no blood shed okay, we're at a truce, just for today." With that he locked you to up in the dark closet.

Deidara scoffed. "Truce, I never agreed to that, hm" He shot you an evil look. "I could kill you were you sat if I wanted to." He shrugged. "Hm, but it's not worth it, yeah. I guess I'll just go along with this, even though it's stupid."

"Well I really do appreciate you not killing me, like, a whole lot actually." You gave Deidara a weak, but honest smile. "So thank you."

Deidara blushed. "Yeah, well you're just lucky I'm not in the mood to kill I guess, hm. So are we going to play this game or what? You know we only have one girl at the Akatsuki and no one's allowed to touch her. So this might actually not be so bad." He was wearing a slight smirk, you couldn't tell what he was thinking but it couldn't be good.

"Yeah, I guess. I mean that is why we're in here right?" You didn't know if this was a good idea, but you really see yourself as having much of a choice.

"Good." He was full blown excited now. "So how do we start this, hm. Never mind, I'll figure it out." Deidara practically launched himself at you, knocking you flat on your back with a loud thud. "My bad, hm. I could have done that better." He placed both of his arms around you and cuddled you tight. Slowly he lowered himself to you, your noses were touching, you could feel his breath on your chest. Finally, he kissed you. As he kissed, he massaged your back and sides. His mouth moved from your lips to your neck, gently he nibbled at you, easily finding your sensitive spots. You let out a quiet sigh, tangling your hands in his hair. He was actually really good at this, you forgot he was a member of the Akatsuki, or that he was dangerous. You were really beginning to like this game. Without warning the door swung open.

"Well, well, well. I surely hope this training isn't going to cause us to loose a leaf ninja over to the Akatsuki." Jiraiya scratched the back of his head nervously. Deidara didn't seem to notice the door was open, he was still busy kissing you. "Wow, he's really into the game isn't he?"

Sasori walked over to the closet to take a look at the situation. "That idiot. I'll take care of this, Tobi, help me out." Sasori signaled Tobi over. Together they picked up Deidara and dragged him away from you.

Deidara flailed around as he protested. "No, wait, I wasn't finished yet, give me five more minutes. Please. This is not cool my man, hm."
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:iconbunnygoblin:
Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner 6 hours ago  New member
haha they had to drag him away
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Cedar-got-TnT Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  New member Hobbyist Artist
Poor Deidara. Wait for it... KATSU!
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Kittykat1017 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014
Give me (pause for dramatic effect) 1 HOUR
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:iconhachidori-chan:
Hachidori-chan Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
How was that 7 minutes?! Jiraiya, I demand a refund! 10 more minutes!
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:icon1000meredith:
1000meredith Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol Dei-kun
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:iconiamthehero2013:
Iamthehero2013 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Student General Artist
I love DD so much. His like a big kid
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InvaderWitchKazu Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*takes out a gun* let Dei go right now we have to finish what we started
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Monitys Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
"No, wait, I wasn't finished yet, give me five more minutes. Please. This is not cool my man, hm."
too funny :D
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Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist
Lol
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:icongalewings:
galewings Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What? No extra time? No fair. :sulk: 
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FreedomFriesFriday Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol he wants five more minutes
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:iconesmereth:
Esmereth Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Loved it ^_^

~Esmereth
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nyanmeh Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
yes! 4 parts!
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:iconshunakkeandringa:
ShunakkeAndringa Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very dead right now. Take me with you, Dei!
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:iconisaikouchiha:
iSaikoUchiha Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
Give us about, maybe, an hour? c:
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:iconthree-days-grace0017:
Three-Days-Grace0017 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh come'on give him more time!
Nice story though
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moonwolf19 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
Give him the time please:p 
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xXShinobi11Xx Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student General Artist
5 more mins pwease?? :`(
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:iconthe-awesomest-one:
the-awesomest-one Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well done! You got deidara spot on! Very good! But.... Couldn't we have just given him those five more minutes? TT-TT
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Thumpuh Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
give him the five minutes TT^TT
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SilentLove832 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMFLJPHMFGB P 2!!!!!!!!!
Dei u lucky dawg u.......
Luvin dis!!!!
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:iconheartrogue:
HeartRogue Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
:iconcannotevenplz: AMG
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:iconkittyunicorn:
kittyunicorn Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Beautiful!!!!!!!
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:iconslender-girl-wins:
slender-girl-wins Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my god! You got Deidara head on great job :iconclapplz:
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^^ :heart:
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:iconslender-girl-wins:
slender-girl-wins Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No need to thank me I should be thanking you for righting such amazing stories
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oOAnriOo Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
Lol, I could see Deidara just screaming getting carried away !! lol, that was funny ! LOL 
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lilyofthevalley1995 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
^///^ I so got a mental picture of dei-chan getting dragged off. lol.
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:iconneyneywalker:
neyneywalker Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
omfg i wldnt mind bein a lil bad with Deirdara
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:iconakinata-uchiha:
Akinata-Uchiha Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
True that :icondeinnosebleedplz:
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:iconneyneywalker:
neyneywalker Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
lol u shld do a sequel with him tryna gt her to join the akatski and showin up at inconvenient times and places...and wrong places tht he shldnt be....tht wld be the laugh of the day for me
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Akinata-Uchiha Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
that would be awesome!
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:iconneyneywalker:
neyneywalker Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
ikr...tht drive her nuts...thn have jiraiya actin like a father and scaring deidara away...and thn make it gt crazy wen naruto notices this and acts like a big bro....and thn outta no where sasuke wants her as well
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Akinata-Uchiha Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
WE SHOULD WRITE A SEQUEL THEN GIVE CREDIT TO VAMPIRE GOD! (we need to get perish first.)
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neyneywalker Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
yeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssssss......tht wld be AWESOME!!!!! LOL THEY WILL LOVE US AND OTHER PPL WILL WANT TO WATCH US LOL
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Akinata-Uchiha Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yush!!! I already have another story I'm writing so if you wanna read it i would be willing to share it with you ^^ just let me know and ill note you^^
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Akinata-Uchiha Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:icondeidaragasmplz:
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canadafangirl12 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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DandKfangirl Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
When i was reading this my reactions were
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XD
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:iconhoshijiru:
HoshiJiru Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol!! Poor Deidara!! I LOOOOOVE this!
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XxxHidanaxxX Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
TY SASORI AND TOBI TY!!!!!
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OtakuHetalia Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That was cute xD
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Puppypancake Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Cute! :iconblushplz:
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thelionesskira Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013   Traditional Artist
five more minutes!!! pleeeeease!!!! i WILL join the Akatsuki if you don't give us-er, i mean him-five more minutes!!!!
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:iconakinata-uchiha:
Akinata-Uchiha Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I TOTALLY AGREE >w< o///o
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thelionesskira Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013   Traditional Artist

yessssss!!!! :D

 

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Sunstone123 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
*is about to pull out my katana cas I'm mad* give him five more min or I go killer mode !
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