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        It was a dark, stormy, evening. You were all alone with nothing to do. Nothing was on TV and you knew no one would want to do anything with you in this weather. You let out a long sigh and started for the kitchen. A sudden knock came from the front door. You quickly ran to the door and opened it, not wanting whoever it was to get soaked. “Spain what are you doing here?”

“I thought you might be bored all alone, so I came over to see if you might want a bit of company.” Spain gave you a cheerful smile and removed his drenched coat. “You don't mind me being here, right? I can leave if you want me to.”

“No, I don't mind at all. Let me just get you a towel, you soaked and I don't want you to get sick.” Leaving him in your home's entrance, you quickly ran off to fetch him a towel. When you returned he was standing in your TV room drenched and shirtless, looking for a movie to watch with you. “H-here's your towel.” A little unprepared to see him like that, you couldn't help but to blush at his current state.

“Oh, thanks!” He happily took the towel and began drying his messy, dripping hair. “You want to watch a movie or something? We could watch something really scary, then we'd have to snuggle up close to keep the monsters away. You know monsters are afraid of snuggling couples.”

His strange statement made you laugh. “Is that so? I'll be honest with you Spain, I've never heard that one before. But if you say it's true, I believe you.” You grabbed the scariest movie you owned and got it ready to play. As you readied the movie, Spain ran to your kitchen for snacks and drinks.

“Let's just hope the power doesn't go out. That would make things really creepy.” After placing the snacks on the table, he swooped you up and sat down on the couch with you, snuggling you close. From the very beginning the movie was horrifying, making you jump and gasp every few minutes. The movie was at the height of creepiness, when suddenly, all power in your house went out. “I quess I shouldn't have said anything about the power, huh?” Spain squeezed you tight. “Only one thing to do. Monsters are strengthened by blackouts, so we'll have to make out. ”

“M-maybe I should just go turn on the generator real quick. Or if you don't feel like waiting, we could just use a candle or flashlight.” Taken back by his uncharacteristic suggestion, you blushed terribly.

“No way man, they'll be expecting us to do that.” He leaned in closer to you so that your lips were almost touching. “I don't know why you're being so shy right now, we've kissed plenty of times before.”

It was true. This wasn't the first time you and Spain had kissed and it  definitely wouldn't be your last. But something was different this time. There was an unknown tension between the two of you, like Spain was trying way too hard to set the mood. “I know, it's just." You paused, searching for the right words. "Actually, I really don't know what it is. It's like your not yourself tonight.”

Spain immediately became nervous. “Not myself?” He laughed awkwardly, then moved back to you with an evil grin. “Maybe they've already gotten me.” Spain started to roughly kiss you as he pulled you on top of him. He ran his hands through your hair and down your back, holding you close. Spain wasn't usually this pushy with you. Suddenly the lights came back on. “Hey, we scared them away.” He smiled wide and squeezed you, kissing you on the nose.

He was just acting too weird. “Spain, what's going on? You're seriously not acting normal. And don't try that monster line on me again. I want the truth.”

Knowing he'd been caught, Spain cleared his throat and looked away from you. “Well, you see.” He cleared his throat yet again and sat up. “I actually wanted to ask you something, I just don't know how.” He looked at the ground nervously.

“It can't be all that bad. Just ask  me. You'll never know my answer if you don't” Gently placing your hand on his deep, red cheek, you turned his face towards you and made him look you in the eye.

“I guess you're right." Spain took a deep breath into his lungs, then spoke. "I want you to come live with me. We've been together for a while now, But I'm really lonely without you with me.” Now that he'd said what needed saying, his face had turned the darkest shade of red you'd ever seen. “I just don't want you to do something you don't want to do just because I'm asking you to do it.” He looked into your eyes with a sort of guilty sadness. "I want you to move in with me because you want to be with me too."

“Is that all you wanted to ask?” You wrapped your arms around his neck and hugged him tight, elated that his question hadn't been something more serious. “That's not bad at all, you had me really, really worried there for a second." You laughed. "Of course I'll come live with you. It's about time you asked me anyway.”

“Really? Thank you!” He quickly returned your hug and started kissing all over your face. “I was worried for nothing then. We should start packing your stuff.” He jumped from the couch and started to look for anything to pack with. “Do you like kids? Because I like kids, especially cute ones. And I think we'd have cute kids.” He stopped and looked at your shocked face. “I'm getting ahead of myself, aren't I?”

“Maybe just a little bit.” You walked over to him,then brought him into your arms for a long, sweet hug. “We can talk about more serious things like that a little later. Let's just focus on packing up and moving first.”
Part one…
Part two…
Part four…

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ProudCanadianGal Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Kawaii, and someone should tell America, what Spain told me!
xX16emjay18Xx Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Student Artist
This is really adorable Fangirl Squeel Emoticon :Kawaii: 
snow-master286 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
Me: ok finished packing...
* 10 minutes later at spain's house *
Me: now about those kids~
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AnimeKitty2014 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014
IKR I agree with every word of this comment! :)
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
AnimeKitty2014 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
ur welcome! ^ ^
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AnimeKitty2014 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
MExSpaniardAntonio Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Student General Artist
Wonderful! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oshaco Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
Awww! All your stories are so sweet, and this one's no exception! They're all so amazing, you're a great writer!
helenadoodle Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ahahah <3
EstrellaNina Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014

Spain: "Do you like kids-"

Me: *cuts him off* I hate kids. I hated kids when I was a kid.

ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015
Me too ^.^

But for some reason, little kids love me.

It's weird T-T
xX16emjay18Xx Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Student Artist
Took the words right out of my mouth Estrella-san ;)
Dark-Candy-Cane Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This went through my head a well. ^-^.
kjxyz1234-gmail Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
Slow your roll spain we'll get there soon enough
DeeKayy84 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014

Oh dear me! >.< I read the ending first :P I shall read them all! This was so cute <3

fuzzy-wuzzy-bear Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
Spain is soo cute in this!!!!
Cessepool Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeash Spain I arms are almost as bad as Mexicans with the kid things
MarioFanfiction Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But, we aren't married yet.
LaurenJr Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
I do believe we can all hold Prussia and France responsible for corrupting our favourite Spaniard  correct?
jaydee0527 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Bad Prussia.
And yes. I am a Canada Fangirl meself, but Spain is adorable, oui? c'est adorable.
Agretfethr Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
“Do you like kids? Because I like kids, especially cute ones. And I think we'd have cute kids.” He stopped and looked at your shocked face. “I'm getting ahead of myself, aren't I?”
XD that KILLED me XD
AmazingEmily9999 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
Christ. I didn't know this story had parts. Well, off to read the beginning!
Caty34576 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you deserve a head hug :ic
creek17 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
xD where ever I go I see you!!!! Hahahaha! Loved the story like always!!!
Konakona321 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconyayspainplz: :iconsaysplz: Vamonos Chica!, wait do you like cute kids?

:iconkonakona321: :iconsaysplz: que? si, I like cute kids *Whispers* Is that a hint?

:iconsexyspainplz: :iconsaysplz: Maybe...

:iconamericapartyhardplz: I'll Take that as a yush! ^_^
sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
yes.....yes he is
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
Loved it ^w^
Realmen-Gerita1238 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol silly spaniard!!!!!
ToshikoYoshikuni Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Agretfethr Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AtlantisReturns Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
sasukeisAjerk Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
You know monsters are afraid of snuggling couples.” :iconamericaapprovesplz:
CooKie-chaan Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Professional Artist
yeees~~ come on Spain .......let's go make some cute babies :iconrapefaceplz: :iconshockedspainplz:

love all your stories <3
GabrielleSee Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
I'm usually not crept-out by horror films and stories..... but if anyone started acting different and clingy.....:iconscaryrussiaplz: I'd probably punch them in the face and call the cops.....or do even more than simply knocking them out cold..... :iconrussiarapefaceplz:
Only guys creep me out. I'm a realist, you see?
It seems, to me, though.... that guys have more of a reason to be afraid of me. :iconrussiahappydanceplz:
mentalitysCanvas Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
geez then I envy you...
RandomGurlonthenet Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist

When Girl thinks of future with Boy,It is normal.


When Boy thinks of future with Girl,It's has a meaning.

furchild1204 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Because guys typically aren't that romantic or think that far ahead in their love lives.

That, or they typically don't say it out loud when they think about it.

Either way, it's adorable when guys speak their mind about that stuff.
FabulousCthulhu Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well Spain IS the country of compassion. Si. I'm right. (I should know this I'm Spanish my self)
veonfan Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like kids....
KittehKrazy9000 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Jeez, Spain, You've been spending to much time with France and Prussia...
Z0MGedELR1C Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist why you shouldn't be friends with Prussia and France...
valeryEB Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
asdfghjklñ!!!! *faints from a nosebleed*
hottygirl101 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student General Artist
"Only one thing to do. Monsters are strengthened by blackouts, so we'll have to makeout." Oh toni, your letting your more... perverted *cough french cough*side out...
DubstepCat Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I blame Francis.
After all, Toni probably sees Gilbert and Francis every day, since he's part of the BTT...
Francis, stop teaching Toni to be like you >:U
LuckyStaar121 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Ohh my cute...I love it!!!
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