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        Tonight was the night of the yearly meteor shower. It happened every year on the same day, around the same time. That being said you couldn't remember the last time you'd actually watched one. You used to watch it faithfully, but somehow, you'd just let the tradition slip. This year's would have passed by without a second thought just like all the others, had Rome not asked you to watch it with him. The two of you sat snuggled up on the cold rooftop of your home waiting for the first meteors to light up the night sky.  

"We should have brought more blankets huh? Maybe some hot coco too.  It's cold out here." Rome brought you closer to him, sharing his body heat with you. "Those meteors are late too, they should be ashamed, making a pretty lady like you wait up here on a freezing roof." He let out a snort. "I should just go up there and bring them down for you. But of course, then you couldn't watch them fall." He grinned, giving you a tight squeeze and kiss on the cheek.

You leaned back against him and pulled the blankets higher. "It's really not that cold, just a bit nippy is all. And you know things are almost  always better if you wait for them."  As you relaxed on Rome the first star lit the sky. You sat straight up, pointing it out with a rather hyper arm motion. "There, there's the first one."

"Yup, they should be falling in groups now." He pulled you back against his chest and brushed your hair back. The stars began falling all around you, lighting up the sky that was pitch black only moments ago just as well as dozens of spotlights. You couldn't believe you'd let so much time pass without watching this, you'd forgotten how beautiful it was. "You were right "_____", this was defiantly worth waiting for."

You leaned back and smiled wide. "See, I told you." You turned around in his arms and hugged him tight. "I'm glad you asked to do this, I'd forgotten how much I loved it. It's really no fun sitting up here all alone you know."

Rome drew you in close. "Well, now you'll have someone to watch it with you every year." He placed his lips on yours, holding you in a kiss for a long while. "I promise."

You snuggled yourself in his chest. "I'll hold you to that you know. I don't let people go back on the promises they make to me. So you better only say things you really mean." While wrapping your arms around him, you felt something firm and square in his back pocket, you immediately jerked back. "What's that?"

"I guess the cat's out of the bag now huh?" Rome cleared his throat and pulled what you felt from his pocket. It was as you'd thought, I small black box, the perfect size for a wedding ring. "I was going to make it a surprise." His face was unusually red as he opened the box. Inside was a ring that looked like it belonged to a queen reigning thousands of years ago. The flashes from the falling stars just made it that much more beautiful. "Would you please be my wife?" His hands were shaking so bad you were afraid he was going to drop the ring.

You nodded. "Yes." It was all you could say. You wrapped your arms around him and kissed him.

He hugged you back, half squeezing the breath out of you from sheer excitement. "Thank you." He kissed you again. "This ring is very old, it may not fit quite right, but we can always fix that." Rome proceeded to place the ring on your finger. It fit like it was made for you. He smiled up at you. "It fits no changes needed, I guess I made the right choice when I picked you."
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:iconlilyvirginia:
lilyvirginia Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
She'll be THE GRANDMA ROME
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Sunstone123 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
*highfive*
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:iconlullabyly:
lullabyly Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student General Artist
this was ADORABLEEEEEE!!!
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anusofwisdom Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great story, it was adorable! Wait, does this mean I'm Romano and Veneziano's grandmother? Kind of funny for a grandmother to be younger than her grandchildren. But still, great story. I love Rome!
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Neryss-Veletz Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
Wait, this means that I'm going to be Romano and Feliciano's grandmother. That's awkward.
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:iconalice-cry11:
Alice-cry11 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
*crys* sooooooooo lovely Yes Rome i will marrie you
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SonicRideMaximum Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

I can die happy now. :iconlachoirplz: I love Rome!

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ranmas2 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
:iconrazycryplz:Like I say on a lot of other stories with marriages..
I'm married to Rome. I can die happy now.
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ClubSantosGirl Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
ok, that last part was the most beautiful line ever!!! <3 Wow!
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:iconinkdrawndreamer:
InkDrawnDreamer Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student General Artist
So sweet ^_^ Your sequel stories are always so nice
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KanGiveHugs Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
This is so cute! But does this make me the boss of Italy and Romano?
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:iconphantasmic-nephilim:
phantasmic-nephilim Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You'd be their step-grandmother xD
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MIMIKU-LIVES Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Squee!!!! This was so cute!!!!
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CeianaLuvsCookies Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
Awwh! Romulus is so cute ! I love this story!
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owlhead20 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconblushplz: awwww! wait...does this mean that I am now Italy's GRANDMOTHER!!!!!!! ?????? ..... fuck it! its still uber cute!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Does anyone know what Rome's human name is?

And I'm a sucker for stories with a starry night sky (or metor shower, in this case). I'm currently holding a competition for it in fact.


In short, I liked this
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
He was never given a human name, not even an unofficial one as far as I know. But I am very glad you liked it. ^^
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well I just found a story where he was named Agustus, so official or not that's what I'm using.

And I really did! You could enter it in my competition, if you like.
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That would make sense.. I call him Harold, because of the song by Kesha. XD
And I'll check out your competition ^^
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD
here's the link [link]
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NoNamedFish Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
I've never seem a fanfic that ships the reader with a character before. Kinda interesting.
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
There are a ton out there actually. ^^ It's pretty much all I write.
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:iconizaya-fangirl-103:
Izaya-fangirl-103 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I just... so cute~! :heart:
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NinjaRosa Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So sweet! :tighthug: All the hugging and the proposal and awwww~ :)
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athelasoflorien Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww! Socute. Love it!
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you liked it ^^
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Bone-Bone Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
:iconstopsignplz:
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:iconronaldo9999:
ronaldo9999 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
teenage girls...teenage girls everywhere
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Nyekii Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PROBLEM?
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:iconmoybella:
Moybella Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
i doubt meteor showers are an annual thing
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
They are ^^ at least in my area. I looked it up first.
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Rhianimation Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student
bwaa cute
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Hoozuki Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
:iconletmehugyouplz: That was so sweet!!!! Lufs for Rome, absolute lufs.
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skye-pixie Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^///^ My heart just melted at the sweetness. Rome can be a nice guy.
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AnnaTheWonderGirl01 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, that's cute! :iconaawplz:
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498311182 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
谢谢楼主分享,天朝人民来贺电
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^^ I hope you liked it.
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TheLivelyHallows Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So cute!! :iconsqueeeeplz:
Random Fact: A meteor shower happened the night before Julius Caesar's assassination. :iconus-xdplz:
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I did not know that. ^^;
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TheLivelyHallows Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's fine. We all know something new everyday.
I still love the story. I think it will be cute for my future husband to engage to me like that. :iconyayromeplz:
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you liked it. ^^
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:iconthelivelyhallows:
TheLivelyHallows Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yep! :iconblushplz:
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Ke-chan12 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
:squee: that was so romantic and so adorable!!! :iconblushplz:
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^ Glad you enjoyed.
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Ke-chan12 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconbigheartplz: :iconletmehugyouplz:
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