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       "God it's so dark I can't see my hand in front of my face." Romania held tightly to your hand. "I know they're trying to give the illusion of an old catacomb, but really they could have given us a little more light in here. Maybe some old torches or something you know?" As the two of you turned a sharp corner, an animatronic skeleton leapt from its grave at you causing you to shriek in horror. Romania laughed. "Really, again? That's the third time you've gotten scared, and we've only just started. He was right, you'd been walking through this dinky haunted catacomb attraction less than five minutes and you'd done nothing but scream.

"Well I'm sorry, I can't help it if I'm easily scared." You squeezed his hand tighter. "Maybe you're not doing a very good job of making me feel safe."

"Oh is that so? Well then maybe I should carry you through the rest of the house with you blindfolded then. Or perhaps I should punch the little robots as they pop up at you hmm?" He kissed your cheek to let you know he was only joking.

"I didn't mean it like that you know. Maybe I'm just a scaredy cat." You snuggled up closer to him and continued down the dark, winding hallway. As Romania opened a heavy wooden door a goblin of some sort popped out. This was no animatronic, but a person in costume. Romania quickly grabbed a small stick laying on the side of the hall on began waving it about like a sword.

"Get behind me m'lady, I'll defend you from this foul creature!" He charged at the goblin full force, smacking him with the makeshift weapon. You were too busy laughing to think about the person inside the suit. "Die, go back to the dark, slimy pit of hell from wince you came!" Romania poked the creature in the stomach causing him to let out a small groan.

"Not so hard man, I don't mind playing along but seriously." The monster removed the mask of the costume to reveal himself as America. "You hit pretty hard dude. So take it easy on me alright? Now move along before I steal your lady from you."

"Ha, I'd like to see you try." Romania Hit America over the head with his stick then grabbed your hand and ran off. "See, I told you I'd keep you safe."

You nodded. "Yes, you did. From America, in a costume." You laughed.

"Is nothing good enough for you?" He stopped walking and somewhat roughly pushed you into one of the old stone walls. "I mean really, what do I have to do?" He leaned in close to you so your noses were touching. You could feel his hot breath on your chest. He'd thrown you a completely off guard and now no words coming out of your mouth at all, just little squeaky sounds. "What, you can't think of anything?" He let out a feigned scoff. "Figures." Romania lowered his mouth to meet yours and began kissing you feverishly. You wrapped your arms around his neck and passionate kissed him back, completely ignoring all those who passed you by.

"Okay you two, that's quite enough, this is a family attraction you know. Now move along." Britain was poking at the two of you with a night stick.

"Alright, alright. Stop poking me. Sheesh man." Romania took your hand and continued walking. "Hey, you think they'd find us if we hid in a coffin?" He wiggled his eyebrows at you and have you a toothy smile.

Britain shouted from behind you. "I heard that you, don't even think about it."

"Crap, maybe the sarcophagus  then."
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BlackRaven7372 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014  Student General Artist
Im not easily scared if anything people are scared of me for no reason.
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piplup245 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014
Lol! Love it!
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Supernovatoon Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconitssofluffyplz:
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Miabia100 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I died laughing at the America part! Loved it!~
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Chibichiree Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww
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TitansCreation Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh Romania you cheeky cheeky boy, let this Scottish girl's heart have a brake :iconheartbeatplz:
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Jojo-korea Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Agreed ^///^
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aidlevice Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Love this. So cute! *faints from cuteness overload*
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XmidnightnightmaresX Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist
Lol the end but no. "It" wouldn't happen for a real long time if im understanding correctly.
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allyvania88 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
XD hope there's wedding bells in the future
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LaurenJr Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
England is ever the mature one.... Unless it comes to his own one-shots then he's just as bad as the others! xD
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seffykoepsel Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D love this
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bettyq2727 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
whats a sarcophagus?
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bettyq2727 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks :3
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
NP
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
MUST....REFRAIN....FROM JUMPING ON ROMANIA... MUST... AGHHHHH
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darkninja45 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
PFFFTT!!!
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SyedSultana Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Lol America the goblin
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MosdrasTheLight Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
not to offend but : Better love story then Twilight.
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eelapatt12 Featured By Owner May 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
duh...
Hetalia Spinning France Ohon honhon hon Icon Hetalia Spinning France Ohon honhon hon Icon Hetalia Spinning France Ohon honhon hon Icon 
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MosdrasTheLight Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
:3 Ok those little frances are adorable
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RubiNight Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
I agree xD 
Romania is a thousand times better than edward xDD 

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patricia02au Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Agreed......
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Kira-Jones Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Every vampire is better than Edward...XP
Stupid twilight...making vampires look sparkly...
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AngelX1300 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
* nods * correct
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FinlandHetalia-0 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
I am hypnotised by his eyes in that picture. I just found my new crush
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ranmas2 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
That picture
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twinkbi0 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
These stories are fricken' works of art.
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StormCloudsLove Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
That was beautiful :DDDDDDDD Oh Romania... xDDDDD
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FabulousCthulhu Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Professional General Artist
I once hid in a funeral coffin. When people came by I scared them. Thing is. It was in my church's gameroom. Soon after, it was taken out. Heh.
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Ericaootori13 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dat ending bruh xD i love this story~~<3
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm very glad you do.
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Ericaootori13 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
Loved the ending XD
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KuroJAG Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
That awkward moment when you and your girlfriend try and make out in a sarcophagus, open the lid, and Egypt is staring back at you... Its weird, but if I ever do have a goth-ish girlfriend I'd be fine with doing that; does that make me crazy or just a bit estranged? eh whatever. great work as usual!
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't think you're strange XD I'd do it.

And thank you so much. ^^
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KuroJAG Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
hey, you deserve the complement, you're way better than me. I don't always post my writing online, but when i do... people don't read it... :Foreveraloneplz:

:trollface: oh... and...that first part of your reply... Was that an invitation? :rofl: sorry I had to, you probably have a boyfriend... hell I'm only 14, WAAAAAAY too young for you... all the same, great job, keep it up, and sorry again for that little troll XD.
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
If people aren't seeing your work, try groups. ^^ They helped me a lot.

And no, no invite there, I'm no :iconpedobearplz: XD
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KuroJAG Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
Alright I'll look around for some, thanks ^_^

...poker-face...*looks left, then right, snaps fingers in an "shucks" sort of way.... laughs it off* alrighty then, either way nice to know I'm not the only one who would do that =)
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FinlandHetalia-0 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
Gimme a link. I'll read anything. Fluff, lemon, yaoi. Anything
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HetaliaFangirl00 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student General Artist
:icondragonhugplz::iconloveloveplz:
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Skitty701 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Crap, maybe the sarcophagus then."

Idiot, everybody knows that Egypt hides in those.
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melodyjackson101 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
Maybe the sarcophagus then...HAHAHA. :iconnosebleedingplz:
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kiyacookies456 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes a sarcophagus is much better Romania :iconus-xdplz:
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AWESOME!!!!!!!!! on Prussia's level!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE ROMANIA!!!! THANK YOU DEAR WRITER!!!!!!!
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