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        "Like Oh my god, just come out of there already, it can't be that bad. I'm sure you look great and stuff. Don't make me crawl under the stall, I like totally will you know." Poland began shaking the door knob furiously. You two were out at the mall looking for something formal to wear to a rather important party. The problem was, you had nothing formal to wear, and you'd never had to wear anything as nice as what Poland kept putting you in. "That's it, I'm coming in."

"No, no, I'll open the door." You opened the dressing room door allowing Poland to see the way over styled dress he'd picked out for you. "I don't know, I think something a little more simple might look better."

He nodded in agreement. "You're totally right, that would look way better on me. I'll go find you something else with less sparkle and stuff." Poland ran off to find you yet another dress.

You knew this would never get anywhere with Poland choosing all the outfits. This had been going on way too long as it was. While he wasn't looking you quickly ran over to a dress that you had been wanting to try on for a while now. Poland wouldn't let you try it on because he thought it was too boring and the wrong color. But you liked it and were determined to at least try it on. Before he returned with another dress you knew you'd hate you slipped out of the dress he'd picked and into yours. Just as you expected, you loved it. It showed off all of your best features and hid the parts of you that you weren't that fond of. Not being at all embarrassed about showing off yourself in this dress, you opened the door. Poland was standing there with several other dresses, which he dropped upon seeing you.

"Like wow." His jaw dropped, face flushed. "You look awesome."

You smiled wide and gave the dress a little twirl in front of the mirrors. "Thank you, you know it's the one you hated so much right?"

Poland gave an embarrassed smile. "I guess you should have just ignored me then. You should totally buy this one. Actually, I'll buy it for you, but like only under one condition." He poked out his lips at you.

"Okay, and what would that be?"

"You totally have to be my date for the party, and all night too. You look way to good to be anyone else's date." He took one of your hands in his and kissed your fingers. "So like, do we have a deal or what?"

"It's definitely a deal." After you changed back Poland proceeded to buy your dress.

"I'm going to have the prettiest date at the party. I bet Lithuania will totally be jealous I didn't ask him to go with me. And I only had to buy you a dress." He snickered.

"Actually Poland, I would have gone with you even if you didn't buy me a dress."

He turned and looked at you in a state of shock. "Like what? Then I totally bought you this dress for nothing! That's not fair at all. Now you owe me big time. Like Oh my god I can't believe you tricked me like that." He let out a deep sigh. "I guess now there is like, only one thing I can do. You'll have to be my girlfriend to make up for the dress. So like, get used to it. I guess it's not so bad though, now I have the prettiest girlfriend at the party." Poland placed a sweet kiss on your cheek.
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Fernan465 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
Poland's logic is adorable and funny lol
candydandylover Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha! Poland is like, so cool! We have alot in common:
°we both love pink
°we both have a sense in fashion 
°and we both say like alot (it's a bad habit for me)
*puts hand on side of my mouth* I think were  related

 But excellent story though! :)
IGame101 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what a cutie ^-^
Vneek Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
IGame101 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
narutoEATsasuke Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Poland.  hes  just,  wow.  he  is  the  best friend  we  can  go  to  in a  fashion  crisis  XD
Dark-Candy-Cane Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
From the way that was written and your profile picture, all I could imagine was that sentence being said in Sheldon's voice. *Mentally, I am laughing like a crazy person* *In the real world, I have currently stopped because my mum has come in and started ranting about 'mental problems'* Heh heh....
narutoEATsasuke Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Dark-Candy-Cane Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Heh heh. I need to stop. I have such a sad life, all I do all day everyday (That I'm not at school) is read X Readers. Still. At least I don't read *Shivers* Lemons....My friends dared me to read one. Afterwards I realized something...I didn't like them anymore. ^-^
narutoEATsasuke Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
same.  awww,  but  lemons  are  interesting.  sure  some  ight  be..awkward,  but  at  least  they  put  effort. At  least you didn't  read  mine  XD
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