Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login

         “Let me see.” Yuffie thought for a moment, then she pointed straight at you. “I think it's your turn to play. You've been very patient, so I think I'll reward you now.” She ran up to you and pulled you to the center of the room. “Go ahead and pick an item. Good luck.”

You placed your hand inside the hat and felt around for a moment. Something soft brushed across your fingers. After lifting it out of the hat, you noticed it was a ribbon very similar to the one Aerith had in her hair. “Um, is this yours Aerith?”

“Nope, it's mine.” Zack practically launched off the couch and ran up to you. “I figured all girls like ribbons, so I put that in there as a gift to whomever picked it.” He had a huge grin on his face. “This is going to be awesome.”

“Maybe for you it will be. But I feel sorry for her. You're so hyper Zack, just try not to kill her in there okay?” Yuffie led you both to the closet and opened the door. “Remember, only seven minuted now, so don't try to do anything too weird. I don't want to open the door and see something... Well you know.” She shut the door and locked it behind her.

Zack stroked his chin. “I wonder what she means by “too weird”.” Oh well.” He shrugged. “As long as I don't bother you, that's all that matters.” He leaned toward you and grinned, his face only inches from yours. “So, what do you want to do first?”

You pressed your hand on his face and pushed him away. “Don't do that, it's creepy. I don't know what we should do, don't ask me.”

“Oh come on. Don't be such a stick in the mud.” Zack moved your hand away and wrapped you in his arms. “It's not like we have a chance to do this everyday, so loosen up, have some fun.” He snuggled you close and started kissing at your neck.

“No, no, no. I don't want to loosen up. Now stop it already.” You were blushing horribly. Honestly you didn't mind the idea of the game, you were just too embarrassed to admit it.

“Are you serious?” Zack sighed. “We should have paired you with Leon. You two could have stared at the wall together and sulked.” He was still holding you tight, but he had stopped kissing you at your request. “So really, we can't do anything while we're in here?”

You stuttered, not sure what to say. You hadn't really expected him to stop. Zack was headstrong, so you thought he'd just ignore you. Now you were going to have to give him permission to start all over again. “Well, I mean, I guess we can do something. But like Yuffie said, don't do anything too weird.”

Zack laughed. “I still have no idea what that even means. But okay, whatever you say, I'll do my best.” He pressed his hand to the nape of your neck and pulled you to him. “Now I have your permission, so don't try to stop me, I won't listen.” Zack quickly pulled you to him and started kissing you. He toyed with your hair with one hand as the other moved under your clothing and rubbed your side and back. Your face was on fire, you should have expected this, but you didn't. You subconsciously moved your arms around his shoulders. Zack leaned back so that you were on top of him, he never stopped kissing you. A moment later Zack ended the kiss and brushed your face with the back of his hand, moving your hair behind your ear. “This really is fun, but I'd hate for it to be the only time I got to kiss you.” He smiled.

You blushed. “I agree. Maybe, we should go on a date. But just one right?”

“No, I think I'd like to go on a lot more than that with you. One would never be enough.” It was his turn to blush.

The door swung open and Yuffie flicked on the lights. “Well, this actually isn't creepy at all. It's just sweet. But sweet or not, you two still have to get out of here.” Yuffie started tugging at your shirt. “Now come on, before people get impatient.”

“It's cool Yuffie, we're leaving anyway. I was promised a date.” Zack picked you up and carried you out of the room.
Link to Intro…

Link to Part 2…

Link to Part 3…
Link to part 4…

If you would like to commission a story, please read the rules on my page and send me a note. Please do not leave any requests/commissions or suggestions for future stories in the comments. Thanks!

:iconpointcommissionsopen: :iconnorequests:
Add a Comment:
MagnoliaOfOo19 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
YunaAmakura Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
hehe, please Aeris tell me this is not yours xDD
Blackblossom659 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
He seems really sweet. ^-^
PyroKismet Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww just one date <3
Yunaleska1 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sweeet. Next chapter! *clicks link*
Saviour-Of-The-Fate Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the last sentence 'I was promised a date.' Idk y but its just so sweet! >v< Amazing! :D
rune-aria Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
so sweeeeet!
yuukiXakira Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehe this sure is amazing i love those of final fantasy a lot each character has his own way and still is sooo damn fun :D they are so hot wish i could play this game with them xD
HighSummonerYuna-X Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Awww, cute! Do you think you could do one with Angeal in????? I would love you forever if you did!!!!!!!!!
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Not taking requests. . . But :iconshiftyplz: I'm working on random Final Fantasy characters for fun. I hadn't thought of Angeal. I'll add him to my list.
HighSummonerYuna-X Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Teehee, thanks!!!!!
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem.
Anarrii Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Have I ever told you how awesome you are
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Umm, I don't know XD. But I thank you! Thank you ^^
Igike Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Zack, why you so adorkable?!?! :blush: this was awesome :D
RandomFangirl214 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
qweruiopqweruiop Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
this. is. amazing!!! :squee:
part 2??
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i don't have one yet. that said, it'll probably be a long while before i do.
qweruiopqweruiop Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
ohh ok :C
GaialeiStrife Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconiloveyouplz: This makes me so very very happy....
MizukiChan00 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
so super nice kupo!~:)
xXxMrsUchihaxXx Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh zack you XD
Add a Comment:

:iconvampiregodesnyx: More from VampireGodesNyx

Featured in Collections

Final fantasy by serenityfirefly97

Final Fantasy by CrystalBarrier

Final Fantasy by whitelotus77

More from DeviantArt


Submitted on
February 2, 2013
File Size
4.4 KB


13,852 (1 today)
275 (who?)


Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.