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        You had just finished up your breakfast when you heard a knock at your door. You weren't expecting company, so you checked to see who it was first through the eye-hole of your door. It was America, you opened the door and invited him in. "Hey America, what brings you over?"

"I was super bored back at my place, so I thought we could hang out today. I already got it all planned out. You're not busy are you?" The smile on his face made it impossible for you to turn him down. Even if you'd had plans for today, you would have probably canceled them.

Having a hard time not showing how glad you were that he asked, you gently shook your head. "No, I'm not busy. What did you have in mind?"

"Okay dude, here it is. Fifties style rollerblading. You can wear the big, puffy poodle skirt and ribbons in your hair, and I'll dress like a grease monkey with the slicked back hair. It'll be awesome dude." He grabbed your shoulders and shook you, he was way too excited about this.

"Okay, we can do that, but I don't have any clothes I can wear." You frowned slightly. "I don't exactly keep clothes like that in my closet you know."

"I already took care of it dude, bought them on my way here." America pulled a shopping bag out of no wear and pushed it into your hands. "Get changed, I'll wait for you here."

You went to your room and changed into the bright pink button up blouse and full skirt with poodle logo he'd picked for you. He'd even gotten you the pink ribbon for your hair and a pair of white bobby socks to complete the look. You walked out of your room to find he was in full costume as well. "I feel like a dork." You laughed at yourself.

"You look super cute." He helped you into his car. "Now lets split baby." The two of you arrived at a building that seemed like it belonged right in the fifties, everything was checkerboard with accents of red. There was even an ice cream shop outside the skating rink. "This place is really wild, huh?" America wiggled his eyebrows at you.

"You're not going to talk like that the whole time are you?" You laced up your skates and headed out to the rink.

America laughed and followed you out. "I don't know, I'd thought about it. It's kinda fun, but I wouldn't want you to... wig out." He took your hand and began to skate with you.  After a few songs, America began to skate backwards while still holding your hands. "Check it out, pretty awesome."

His cockiness worried you. Anytime someone tried to show off like he was, they always ended up getting hurt or embarrassing themselves. It was like an unspoken rule of the universe. "You're going to fall America, I can feel it."

"No, I'm not dude, don't jinx me." No sooner had America finished his sentence than he'd lost his footing, falling flat on his back landing you on top of him. "Ouch, don't say it.. I know, you warned me."

You rolled off of him and helped him to his feet. "I did, you okay?"

"Yeah, but I think I'm done skating. Let's go get a shake and split it like in those cheesy movies!" He grabbed your hand and ran to the cafeteria, ordering a large shake with two straws. "Better drink it fast dude, or you won't get any." The two of you quickly began sucking down the shake until you both got brain freezes. "So, you know what this means right?"

"What what means?" You looked at him with a puzzled look on your face.

"Sharing a shake with me." America was grinning ear to ear. "It means your my girl.  You can't just go sharing drinks with guys you know. You'll be known as a run around sue. So, you'll be mine right?"

You blushed. "Well, I wouldn't want a bad rep. So, I guess."

America hugged you. "Dude, I totally didn't think that was going to work, but it did." He laughed. "I'm totally going to have to kiss tony when I get home.. Maybe not, I'll kiss you instead."
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:icongalaxysnowleopard:
galaxysnowleopard Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
KAWAII!
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:icongoldenhawktress:
Goldenhawktress Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Tuuu cuuwte!Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-03 (Squee) [V1] 
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:iconwhybot221:
Whybot221 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015
so cute
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:iconmksmokeswifey:
MKSmokesWifey Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Too cute! :heart:
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princess-snow-wolf Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
I really wanted to say this about the last part in the seven minutes in heaven part, was Italy really the best person to "guard" the door? The idea of him stopping someone is to adorable. (Sorry if you didn't want to hear comments on that part of the story but it had me laughing so hard.)
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:icondarkfang1012:
darkfang1012 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  New Deviant
Canada would be worse he would be trampled over like instantly
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:iconprincess-snow-wolf:
princess-snow-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015
I don't know have you seem an angry/determined Canadian they get scary. Trust me my Grandma's Canadian.
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:icondarkfang1012:
darkfang1012 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  New Deviant
I can't imagine Canada mad he is to cute :love:
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:iconprincess-snow-wolf:
princess-snow-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015
No. Trust me, an angry Canadian is not cute. They're just as likely to go Psycho as any one, if not more. Plus, no one thinks I'm cute when I'm angry. Though they do think it's cute when I sneeze. Apparently it's like a kitten. Plus my Grandma is actually from Canada and she can be down right vicious when she's mad.
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:icondarkfang1012:
darkfang1012 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  New Deviant
Ok I still think Canada is cute when mad
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:iconprincess-snow-wolf:
princess-snow-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015
Okay, I'm just gonna say don't try to test that theory. Also thanks for following me. I actually just wrote a journal to celebrate getting my 50th follower. (You're my 51st) You should check it out cause I'm offering requests on it.
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darkfang1012 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  New Deviant
I did and if I want art I draw it myself (I don't really like to rely on other people often not that I don't love your art it's fantastic I just don't trust people often)
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Goldenhawktress Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ikr Same her I couldn't stop laughing afterwards!
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princess-snow-wolf Featured By Owner May 3, 2015
He'd probably make the second worse guard ever. (The first would be any of the pranksters (Gilbert, Matthias, Romania, Ect.) who would open the door themselves to see what was happening.
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:iconakimoto-michiyo:
Akimoto-Michiyo Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
"No, wait! Big brother France, you can't-a go in there! America told me to guard the door!" *adorable Italian salute*
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:iconprincess-snow-wolf:
princess-snow-wolf Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Ya, I guess that might work.
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:iconkjxyz1234-gmail:
kjxyz1234-gmail Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
KAWAII-DESU NE
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:iconemmalynncat:
emmalynncat Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*china's voice* KAWAII!!!! SO KAWAII, ARU!
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:iconcapricouscatnip:
capricousCatnip Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
*says in China's voice* SOOOO CUTE!!!!
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:iconfloridadaawesome:
Floridadaawesome Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
XD i love america! but that's probably cus our personalizes are the same. And tony is a genus~  
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YummyNums Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I might get jealous if you kiss tony america!

(reads next part)... ill kiss you instead."

Hell Yes!<3

Sebastian (whisper) it worked you can come out now!
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bitchycancer Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

litteraly if that happened, i would be skatng backwards teaseing him, because when it comes to skating im kinda a bitch.


 


 


 


(I LOVED this)

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Konakona321 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
America hugged you. "Dude I totally didn't think that was going to work, but it did." He laughed. "I'm totally going to have to kiss tony when I get home.. Maybe not, I'll kiss you instead." 

YAY DATS RIGHT KISS MEH NOT TONY!
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PixelatedGurl Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconovariesplz:
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:icondragonowl21:
dragonowl21 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, come on! I've already had to clean up a few over there, some guy barfed... 

Yeah, I'm the janitor for this place, whadda you got to say?

I didn't think so. 
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:iconfloridadaawesome:
Floridadaawesome Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
I feel successful, cuz part of me said. I taught him that.
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:iconsonicgfriendkat:
sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist
gon home form E.T. maybe he is Tony's cousin
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:iconhaleyboplucy:
haleyboplucy Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha youre gonna fall, I can feel it.
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:iconneko-lover22:
neko-lover22 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wait... what!!!! Was america kissing Tony? Am i missing out on something!!!!
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:iconinvisible-neko:
Invisible-Neko Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
He was gonna because Tony be a genius. XD
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:icontierany-chan:
Tierany-chan Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Run Around Sue... is a really good song...

And this was... really cute...

*looks down in shame* Don't... judge me... for liking old music...
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Igy-of-Prussia Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Student Photographer
Lol me to XD
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is a good song. And I won't judge ya, I listen to even older music.
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:icontierany-chan:
Tierany-chan Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh? Like who? *is hoping you'll mention Bach, Vivaldi, or Beethoven*
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I listen to all of that, but as far as old music with words. Tommy James, Beatles, Air Supply, Beegee's, a lot of 70's stuff, and a bit of 50's like tony martin, and bing crosby. And of course, Elvis.
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:icontierany-chan:
Tierany-chan Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think I like you. You basically listen to the same stuff as me.
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:iconsh4naynay123:
sh4naynay123 Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
Really cute! :iconyayamericaplz: but to bad I can't skate... :iconsadnessplz:
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
me either. ^^,
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:iconxxartimisxx:
xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Too bad I can't skate to save my life... ^^;
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:iconthekoalaoverlord:
Thekoalaoverlord Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
Trick question me?
On skates?
Without hurting myself or others?

Ha I make sure I do my random gravity checks no matter what!
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worldsbiggestotaku Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
aahh so cute and funny! :iconitssofluffyplz: :iconcuteamericaplz:
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:iconninjapixels:
NinjaPixels Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG. I just went skating last night. :XD:
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fioleeshadamy411 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student Artist
i would have worn skinny jeans a pink t-shirt with the words"GREECE LIGHTNING" written across and a leather jacket oh and sunglasses with my hair curled almost like sandy at the end of the movie greece
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Bluefur101 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
Awww, cute!!!!
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:iconbatcookies152:
batcookies152 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
This so cute!!!!
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!!
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:icondormouse1470:
Dormouse1470 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm going to fall off my chair! This was definitely the funniest AmericaXReader I've read!
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ShadowXTear Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD oh mein gott I almost died of laughter xD :iconprussiaplz:
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:iconkangivehugs:
KanGiveHugs Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
Oh my gosh! This is so many adorbs!!!! Me and America are like Danny and Sandy!!! :squee: Forget Tony, America. He doesn't have to know. ;)
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