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       "I don't know about this. Why don't we ride something else first, something like the Ferris wheel or the carousel,  you know to help build up the anticipation or something." Prussia stood outside the line for the biggest, fastest roller coaster in the park.

You shook your head. "No way, the lines going to get crazy if we wait, that's why we had to get here early. What's the matter, you scared or something?" You poked him and gave him a teasing grin.

"No way man, I'm way to awesome to be scared." He grabbed your hand and led you into the already growing line. Despite what he said, you knew he wasn't big on roller coasters, or thrill rides in general, you were actually a bit shocked he'd even agreed to come with you today. The closer you two got to the front of the line, the tighter he held your hand.

"You don't have to ride it you know. You can just walk through to the other side if you want. I don't mind riding it by myself."

"I told you I wasn't scared. God woman, don't you listen?" It was your turn next. You and Prussia boarded the ride and strapped yourselves in. He let out a weak laugh. "I don't know about you, but these harnesses look a little flimsy to me. Seems like they should have something a bit stronger for a ride like this, you know." He kept tugging and tightening his restraints even after the employees had checked and cleared the train. The signal was given that all was clear an you started to move. "I lied, I'm scared, can I get off now?" He grasped to your hand as tight as he could.

"No. Sorry, but now we're moving, your stuck on the ride until the end. Just pray it doesn't break down." You grinned evilly at him.

"Does that happen a lot? You're joking right?" The ride started picking up speed and went through the first of many loops. A corkscrew and boomerang followed, leading up to the largest drop of the ride. Prussia was silent, and you couldn't read his face. He didn't look as scared as he was at the beginning of the ride, he actually looked as if he might be enjoying it. As you both began your plummet to the bottom of the hill, Prussia let out a high pitched scream. You didn't even try to stop yourself from laughing at him. After what seemed like only mere seconds to you, but an eternity for Prussia, the ride ended.

"See, that wasn't so bad was it?" You smiled and helped Prussia out of the train. He was still a bit shaken from the whole experience.

He clung to you but shook his head. "I don't think I'll be running back into the line anytime soon, but it was okay. I just don't know why you like them so much." He took your hand and kissed your cheek. "Let's go get something to eat, I didn't eat breakfast this morning,  just  in case. I didn't want to look like a loser throwing up you know."

"We should check out our pictures first. I bet they got you screaming in them." You ran off to check before they changed.

Prussia quickly chased after you. "Wait, why would you want a picture of that? Come back here." It was to late, you already purchased the picture. You took the photo out of the slip and began laughing like crazy.

"This is great, look at your face. I think, we should get copies." You were laughing so hard your eyes began to water.

Prussia swiped it from your hand and stared down at it. "Seriously, we can never show this to anyone, ever."
This happens after my "seven minutes in heaven"
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:iconchevellelove:
Chevellelove Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  New member Student General Artist
Omg I am the same with roller coasters. I'm like yeah lets do this, but once I get strapped in Im like nope can I get off help meeeee
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:iconscotgaelicvalkyrie27:
O_o wow. did not know he didn't like roller coasters. I completely love them though!!Dance! 
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:iconhelenadoodle:
helenadoodle Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AHHHahahah I love roller coasters 
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:iconcessepool:
Cessepool Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I would laugh my ass off then go on another roller coaster like the rocking roller coaster in Florida. Dame a fine roller Coster
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:iconalice-cry11:
Alice-cry11 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
me and purssia would never be around anything like that Im way to scared of that "thing"
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:iconlaurenjr:
LaurenJr Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
I am totally Prussia when it comes to thrill rides of any kinda, but 2/3 I'll come off them grinning and saying how stupid I was for being scared.... Don't even ask about the other 1/3
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:iconpokemontime123:
pokemontime123 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
poor prussia whos awesome now
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:iconalice-cry11:
Alice-cry11 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
lolz i love that i wish i could 'like' it or something XD
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:iconfabulouscthulhu:
FabulousCthulhu Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Professional General Artist
I took him to Ghost Rider. I love that one. hurrrrrrrrrrrr...
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:iconwoowme:
Woowme Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What's funny is that I'm 1/4 Prussin and I'm scared sh*tless by roller coasters
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:iconsonicgfriendkat:
sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
same here for roller coasters the speed fu***** scares me and the fact that every time i get on a roller coaster someone throws up in my seat XP
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:iconwoowme:
Woowme Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm the one who all ways hurls X3
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:iconsonicgfriendkat:
sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist
well one time i was in the front and a 13 year old boy trow up in my seat (he was behind me) while i was leaning forward XP
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:iconwoowme:
Woowme Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*shivers*
Gross
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:iconsonicgfriendkat:
sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist
i know right
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:iconwoowme:
Woowme Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'd be like
" HOW DARE U SIRS! " and slap him
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:iconsonicgfriendkat:
sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist
i slapped him
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:iconsmilebecuzisayso:
smilebecuzisayso Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Student
It's funny I was at a theme park yesterday.
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:iconlilninetails:
LilNineTails Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Revenge from the party, betch! >:D
Still love you, though, Gil~ <3
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:iconhetaliafangirl00:
HetaliaFangirl00 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I find this funny, I act like Prussia did when it comes to rollercoasters... :iconderpplz:
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:iconhelchou:
HElCHOU Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
kesese~ awesome work! xD
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:iconfall-like-angels:
Fall-Like-Angels Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh GOTT!!! *makes copies of picture and gives them to everyone* Sorry Prussia, but it had to be done.
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:iconchristopher-hart:
Christopher-Hart Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Professional General Artist
Nice work -- looks like a published piece. Are you a pro?
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^; no, I do hope to be one day. Thank you very much!
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:iconfioleeshadamy411:
fioleeshadamy411 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student Artist
what happened to the pervert
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:iconbluefur101:
Bluefur101 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Oh my gosh I am SO like Prussia when it comes to rides! XD
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:iconbasketcase789:
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Hahaha that was too funny :'D
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:iconcompytech:
CompyTech Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This.....Oh God.
Reading this stuff makes me nauseous.
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:iconredrobinsgirl:
RedRobinsgirl Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
major roller coaster junkie right here! poor Prussen, you might die with me :cries:
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:iconwaterfalleaf:
Waterfalleaf Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist
... Where. Is. This. Roller. Coaster? I just want to ride it. :|

... uhm xD Story is good, even if I'm not a Prussia Fangirl :meow:
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:iconpolicegirlvespa:
PoliceGirlVespa Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
-makes copies of Le picture and hands them to everyone at the world conference, then mails one to Sealand- -trollface-
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:icondeidararules3546:
deidararules3546 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's so my character and Prussia. XD
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:iconlostwhisperer:
LostWhisperer Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
The ride braking down made me snicker, when I went to SeaWorld in Florida, the Manta broke down when they wher half upside down. Took ten minuets to get the ride working long enough to get the people off.
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's happened to me b4, terrible experience. *sd*
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:iconowlhead20:
owlhead20 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
just AWESOME!!
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:iconkida-neechan:
Kida-neechan Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Jee i love it! when will the next chapter release?
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It all depends on polling votes ^^ I still have to finish part 2s for everyone else though.
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:iconkida-neechan:
Kida-neechan Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah :iconxddplz: doea that mean i'll wait for a long time :iconimtwitchingplz:
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, like I said, If people start glomping me for Prussia, no. But If I continue getting heavy request for other part 2's... yes.
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:iconkida-neechan:
Kida-neechan Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Oh okay :iconokaymemeplz:
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:iconsizeby:
sizeby Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
HAHAHAHAHAHA
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:iconchase4ever:
chase4ever Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
I would totally do that to him!!!
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:iconsasami227:
sasami227 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Now I shall draw this pic that has been embetted into my mind but first. Is it all right with the author.
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:iconemolove590:
emolove590 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
i want to see
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:iconsasami227:
sasami227 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I most likely wont upload it because of me lack o getting it onto m computer/ suckky art skills
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:iconemolove590:
emolove590 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
ok
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sure I don't mind ^^
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:iconowlhead20:
owlhead20 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
may I also draw a pic based on this!?
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You sho can ^^
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:iconowlhead20:
owlhead20 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
yay!
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