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        "I don't know about this. Why don't we ride something else first, something like the Ferris wheel or the carousel, you know, to help build up the anticipation or something. We can start riding the bigger rides as the day goes on. That way we won't be bored at the end of the day." Trying his very hardest to talk you out of what you were both about to do, Prussia stood outside the line for the biggest, fastest roller coaster in the park. “Besides, this looks kind of dangerous. I don't want you to get hurt or something like that.”

Knowing the real problem was that he was scared, you shook your head. "No way, the line are going to get crazy if we wait until later. That's why we had to get here early.” Nudging him in the side with your elbow, you looked up at him and smirked. “What's the matter, you scared or something?" Wanting only to tease him, you allowed your smirk to widen. “You're not a big chicken, are you? Someone as “Awesome” as you should be able to do this, no problem.”

"No way man I'm scared. I'm way too awesome to be scared, just like you said." Needing to prove himself to you, and anyone else that might have heard, he grabbed your hand and led you into the already growing line. Despite what he said, you knew he wasn't big on roller coasters, or thrill rides in general. You were actually a bit shocked he'd even agreed to come with you today. “I'm going to ride this, and you're going to eat your words.” Though he tried to look tough, the closer you two got to the front of the line, the tighter he held your hand.

“I know you said that you're not scared, but you don't have to ride it you know. You can just walk through to the other side if you want. They'll let you wait for me there." Smiling up at him, you tried to give him one last chance to leave before it was too late. "I honestly don't mind riding it by myself. Actually, I'm pretty used to it."

"I've already told you multiple times that I'm not scared. God woman, don't you listen to anything that I say to you?" As he went into a mini sneezing fit, the next car pulled into the station and the gates swung open, allowing you both inside. You and Prussia quickly boarded the ride and strapped yourselves in. Now buckled in, he let out a weak laugh. "I don't know about you, but these harnesses look a little flimsy to me. Seems like they should have something a bit stronger for a ride like this, you know." Obviously worried, he kept tugging and tightening his restraints even after the employees had checked and cleared the train. “There's just no way this is going to keep us from dying.”

“Trust me Prussia, it'll hold.” As you tried to reassure him, the signal was given that all was clear an you started to move.

The moment Prussia sensed movement, his eyes widened and his face went terribly pale. "I lied. I'm scared. I hate heights and I hate roller coasters even more. Can I get off now?" Half hyperventilating, he grasped to your hand as tightly as he could.

"No. Sorry, but now we're moving. You're stuck on the ride until the very end. Just pray it doesn't break down, explode or run into another car." Knowing that none of those things were at all likely to happen, you grinned evilly at him.

"Does that kind of crap happen a lot? You're joking, right? You're just trying to freak me out even worse." Before you could even think about answering, the ride started picking up speed and went through the first of many loops. A corkscrew and boomerang followed, leading up to the largest drop of the ride. Prussia was now completely silent, and you couldn't read his face. He didn't look as scared as he was at the beginning of the ride. Actually, he looked as if he might be enjoying it. As you both began your plummet to the bottom of the hill, Prussia let out a high pitched scream. The scream was so comical and over dramatic, you didn't even try to stop yourself from laughing at him. After what seemed like only mere seconds to you, but an eternity for Prussia, the ride ended.

"See, that wasn't so bad was it? I bet if you ride it a few more times, you'll actually start to have some fun." Not at all dazed by the ride, you smiled and helped Prussia out of the train. The slightly crazy expression on his face made it obvious that he was still a bit shaken from the whole experience.

He clung to you so tightly your hand had started to go numb, but shook his head. "I don't think I'll be running back into the line anytime soon, but it was okay. It wasn't as bad as I thought it would be anyway.” Embarrassed, he let out a loud sigh. “I just don't know why you like them so much." Trying to look much more calm than he actually was, he loosened his hold on your hand and kissed your cheek. "Let's go get something to eat. I didn't eat breakfast this morning, just in case I got sick or something. I didn't want to look like a loser throwing up you know."

“Right, that makes sense.” A bit hungry yourself, you happily nodded in agreement. "We should check out our pictures first. I bet they got you screaming on them." Hopeful, and obviously excited, you ran off to check before they changed.

Prussia quickly chased after you, hoping to stop you before you could see the picture. "Wait, why would you want a picture of that? Come back here." Though he had tried to catch up to you, it was too late. The park was crowded and you had already managed to purchase the picture.

“I really hope this is as funny as I think it's going to be.” Unable to wait any longer, you carefully took the photo out of the slip. With just one glance, you began laughing like crazy. "This is absolutely perfect. Just look at your face. I think we should get copies." Though Prussia didn't seem even slightly amused, you were laughing so hard your eyes had actually started to water. “Oh my god, my face hurts from smiling.”

Prussia swiped it from your hand and stared down at it. After a moment, he shook his head and handed it back to you. With a firm look on his face, he placed his hands on your shoulders and spoke in a slow, serious tone. "Seriously, we can never show this to anyone, ever."
Part one. fav.me/d5kzv24

Part three vampiregodesnyx.deviantart.com…
Part four 2am. Prussia x Reader
Part five Visiting the Past. Prussia x Reader

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:iconzombiedswim:
ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015
That is so me!

I went on a roller coaster and my brother/mom/everyone else on it was screaming, and I was laughing my a** off.
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cr8zyg8rl Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I'm showing those to every one. America, Germany, Italy, Japan, England, Austria, HUNGARY, Switzerland-wait. WHERE WAS GILBIRD IN ALL THIS?!
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Chevellelove Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Omg I am the same with roller coasters. I'm like yeah lets do this, but once I get strapped in Im like nope can I get off help meeeee
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:iconscotgaelicvalkyrie27:
O_o wow. did not know he didn't like roller coasters. I completely love them though!!Dance! 
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:iconhelenadoodle:
helenadoodle Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AHHHahahah I love roller coasters 
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:iconcessepool:
Cessepool Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I would laugh my ass off then go on another roller coaster like the rocking roller coaster in Florida. Dame a fine roller Coster
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:iconalice-cry11:
Alice-cry11 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
me and purssia would never be around anything like that Im way to scared of that "thing"
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LaurenJr Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
I am totally Prussia when it comes to thrill rides of any kinda, but 2/3 I'll come off them grinning and saying how stupid I was for being scared.... Don't even ask about the other 1/3
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pokemontime123 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
poor prussia whos awesome now
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:iconalice-cry11:
Alice-cry11 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
lolz i love that i wish i could 'like' it or something XD
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:iconfabulouscthulhu:
FabulousCthulhu Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I took him to Ghost Rider. I love that one. hurrrrrrrrrrrr...
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:iconwoowme:
Woowme Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What's funny is that I'm 1/4 Prussin and I'm scared sh*tless by roller coasters
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sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
same here for roller coasters the speed fu***** scares me and the fact that every time i get on a roller coaster someone throws up in my seat XP
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:iconwoowme:
Woowme Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm the one who all ways hurls X3
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sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist
well one time i was in the front and a 13 year old boy trow up in my seat (he was behind me) while i was leaning forward XP
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:iconwoowme:
Woowme Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*shivers*
Gross
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:iconsonicgfriendkat:
sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist
i know right
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:iconwoowme:
Woowme Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'd be like
" HOW DARE U SIRS! " and slap him
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:iconsonicgfriendkat:
sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist
i slapped him
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:iconsmilebecuzisayso:
smilebecuzisayso Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Hobbyist
It's funny I was at a theme park yesterday.
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:iconlilninetails:
LilNineTails Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Revenge from the party, betch! >:D
Still love you, though, Gil~ <3
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:iconhetaliafangirl00:
HetaliaFangirl00 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I find this funny, I act like Prussia did when it comes to rollercoasters... :iconderpplz:
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:iconhelchou:
HElCHOU Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
kesese~ awesome work! xD
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:iconfall-like-angels:
Fall-Like-Angels Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh GOTT!!! *makes copies of picture and gives them to everyone* Sorry Prussia, but it had to be done.
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Christopher-Hart Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Professional General Artist
Nice work -- looks like a published piece. Are you a pro?
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^; no, I do hope to be one day. Thank you very much!
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:iconfioleeshadamy411:
fioleeshadamy411 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student Artist
what happened to the pervert
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:iconbluefur101:
Bluefur101 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Oh my gosh I am SO like Prussia when it comes to rides! XD
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:iconbasketcase789:
basketcase789 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Hahaha that was too funny :'D
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:iconcompytech:
CompyTech Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This.....Oh God.
Reading this stuff makes me nauseous.
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:iconredrobinsgirl:
RedRobinsgirl Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
major roller coaster junkie right here! poor Prussen, you might die with me :cries:
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:iconwaterfalleaf:
Waterfalleaf Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist
... Where. Is. This. Roller. Coaster? I just want to ride it. :|

... uhm xD Story is good, even if I'm not a Prussia Fangirl :meow:
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PoliceGirlVespa Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
-makes copies of Le picture and hands them to everyone at the world conference, then mails one to Sealand- -trollface-
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:icondeidararules3546:
deidararules3546 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's so my character and Prussia. XD
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LostWhisperer Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
The ride braking down made me snicker, when I went to SeaWorld in Florida, the Manta broke down when they wher half upside down. Took ten minuets to get the ride working long enough to get the people off.
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VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's happened to me b4, terrible experience. *sd*
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:iconowlhead20:
owlhead20 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
just AWESOME!!
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:iconkida-neechan:
Kida-neechan Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Jee i love it! when will the next chapter release?
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It all depends on polling votes ^^ I still have to finish part 2s for everyone else though.
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:iconkida-neechan:
Kida-neechan Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah :iconxddplz: doea that mean i'll wait for a long time :iconimtwitchingplz:
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, like I said, If people start glomping me for Prussia, no. But If I continue getting heavy request for other part 2's... yes.
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:iconkida-neechan:
Kida-neechan Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Oh okay :iconokaymemeplz:
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:iconsizeby:
sizeby Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
HAHAHAHAHAHA
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:iconchase4ever:
chase4ever Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
I would totally do that to him!!!
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:iconsasami227:
sasami227 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Now I shall draw this pic that has been embetted into my mind but first. Is it all right with the author.
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:iconemolove590:
emolove590 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
i want to see
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:iconsasami227:
sasami227 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I most likely wont upload it because of me lack o getting it onto m computer/ suckky art skills
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:iconemolove590:
emolove590 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
ok
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:iconvampiregodesnyx:
VampireGodesNyx Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sure I don't mind ^^
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:iconowlhead20:
owlhead20 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
may I also draw a pic based on this!?
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